Waves in Flag
by DennisF

Comment:
Last time I checked, the stars on the american flag are white.. DOn't know why it does not look that way on this image, but it certainly pulls down the overall of this otherwise very good picture (6)

Right on Schedule...Amtrak 165
by OneSweetSin

Comment:
The image seems fuzzy - try to use a smaller aperture, and make sure that teh "amtrak" logo is 109% in focus. Good idea, however (5)

Lightbulb
by Remie

Comment:
An interesting image indeed. For perfection, I would have tried to remove the text off of the side of the bulb, though... I can think of quite a lot of stock photography usage where "made in france" would be a problem. (7)

Annual Report
by Jak

Comment:
A good image, but the digital noise (compression errors?) really pulls this one down I am afraid. (4)

Pipe Dreams
by greenem2

Comment:
Very nice and artistic image, but as far as stock photography goes, I think you are getting a little bit too abstract. (7)

Time After Time
by autool

Comment:
Dunno what the hell is going on here, but technically and rhythmically, this is a great shot. (9)

Bouncing Balls Stopped in Time
by GolferDDS

Comment:
Except I think these balls are laying still, this is a very nice picture. One of the few depicting rhythm in any kind of way. As a detail, I would have turned over the second ball - and only let balls marked "2" show.. FOr consistency. (9)

Bloop-bloop... bloop-bloop... (Steam Symphony)
by Pep Ventosa

Comment:
Not sure how rhytmic this is, but I get a rhuythm and blues connotation, and the picture is gorgeous. Grade: 9

Different perspectives
by Gordon

Comment:
(Critique Club)

From the perspective, it looks as if you are standing on one of these balconies. That probably means you can support your camera on the edge of the railing. That also means you could have rested your lens on the edge, used a 1/2 second shutter time and used an ISO 200. Which would - to a very large degree - have solved the problems with this image: in all the dark areas, there is a lot of digital noise. Also, the D60 has a nasty tendency to wringing the reds up way too much.

Okay, enough whining about the technical parts; Well seen, great use of your D60, and a fabulous use of the 20mm!

Haje

I Love You
by BAMartin

Comment:
A great idea, but the picture is too much out of focus for my taste. If you want to do stuff like this, use a smaller aperture to capture everything sharp! ;) (vote: 6)