DSC01512
by kevinswope

Comment:
This good shot could have been more than just a snapshot very easlily.

Let's go over a few points.

Composition: the photo is too centered and lacks compostion. Move the performer to one side of the frame or try turning the camera onto a portrait orientation.

Exposure is a little off and too bright making the performers face washed out.

Saturation: It appears that you boosted the saturation on the photo, while I like the effect, you may have overdone it a bit.

The end of the faceless?
by Art Roflmao

Comment:
Love the use of wood grained and plastic nudity... :-)

Nutrena Feeds
by Elaine

Comment:
Technically, everything in your photo is dead-on. Your focus is sharp, exposure is perfect. But, the photo has no wow factor in a challenge loaded with industrial buildings. A braver composition may have given it the wow. Overall, it was just a hard challenge to please voters in.

Fearless
by chakkobbo

Comment:
Don't do it man! It's just not worth it!

Industrial Bronze
by fotomann_forever

Comment:
Just in case anyone is interested ... I'm selling prints HERE

Form and Flow
by LeeD

Comment:
Yup, definitely would have worked for me in the Challenge. I couldn't have voted on it, but I like it. I've seen something similar in one of the Pro-Lighting books, albeit a color image.

BTW, thanks for your posts in my thread. I appreciate people that stand up for others.

BTW again, your wife is very beautiful, definitely worthy of artistic impressions.

The Prophet
by e301

Comment:
10 .. wonderful photo and edgy (and probably not so popular) statement.

Is breakfast too early for beer?
by debapaka

Comment:
Nothing better than beer for breakfast . That's what I've always said. :-) I think I would have preferred this shot with a beer can or bottle sitting with the breakfast food, rather than being poured, as this just throws the composition way out of wack.

What time is it?
by PhotoTess

Comment:
Looks like a hangover :-) A little under-exposed, and I'd prefer not to see the camera.

Christmas Magic
by danderson107

Comment:
Not sure I like the star effects, but otherwise I love it. Great work! Good use of ambient light.