Day 1 edited: the stairs
by Shmee

Comment:
I really don't think this needed any cropping. Everything in the picture works without it being too busy. I love all the horizontal and vertical lines everywhere. You did a great job lightening the dark areas and improving detail overall. She doesn't seem as sharp in the edited version, but that's the only critique I have. Nice.

Day 2 edited: farm land
by Shmee

Comment:
The sky in this is fantastic. I like the colors in the rest (though a bit over saturated) but I'm not too crazy about the blur. Vignetting would do the same job without calling so much attention to itself.

DAY 7. edited . the intersection .
by roz

Comment:
Well....it's certainly different...and creative. You did kind of a drawing thing around some of the lightpoles. I like the way that turned out. You clearly had fun playing.

Day 8 - Prow
by xianart

Comment:
I love the simplicity and elegance of this piece. The sky creates such a wonderful negative space that flows around the hull like water. There is great detail everywhere, and nothing is blown out. Great!

Day 7 Among the Rocks
by Elaine

Comment:
I like the way the rocks form a frame for the flowers in the center. I might have moved a bit closer just to eliminate the tree trunk and enclosure wall behind. That would also enhance the flowers which are the main subject. Lighting is a little flat. Overcast? I would bump up the exposure one notch.

Day 4 Flowers
by Elaine

Comment:
This is incredible. Good comosition and perfect lighting/exposure.l The detail in the flowers (crocuses?) makes my knees weak. What beautiful colors and great contrast. I'm imagining a darkened background in pp to bring out the flowers even more. Can't wait.

Day 5 - Berries
by Bruce_the_Robert

Comment:
I wish you'd taken this when the light was more on this side of the branch. Great color and contrast. Detail would improve with better lighting or in pp.

Tree
by Alicia

Comment:
You have a strong composition with an interesting subject and a pleasing background. I'd like to see this in B&W. I think it would really increase the drama - especially in the sky. There's plenty of contrast, so I think it would work.

Horse.Day 4
by emily212

Comment:
I think with some creative cropping this will be a very nice portrait. I'd take the sky down to just above the very tip of his ear thereby eliminating the overblown highlights. I'd also reduce the right side negavtive space to be about equal to the left. Clone out the fence wire, adjust for black and white points in levels, and, wham, beautiful shot! Yeah, too bad he didn't have a bath first, but maybe you can clean him up with the healing brush.

Isabelle Colour Edit
by TCGuru

Comment:
I love the quality of light you've captured in this. She is so soft and warm looking. The little bit of highlight you still have works well to establish a true white, and all the colors are wonderfully pastel. Again, the only improvement would be to have her arm back in the picture. Great job, Jojo.