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| 10/14/2004 11:19:00 PM |
Tattoosby tyt2000Comment: Very interesting subject, but I would have liked to have seen some kind of prop or setting to help me understand what he is about rather than just the non-descript and cold background. Skin tones look a bit too orangy/red. |
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| 10/14/2004 12:27:57 PM |
Smiling eyesby arpitaComment: Nice intimate portrait and I like the close cropping, but I find the yellow color cast unattractive and the thick white and black border reduces it's impact as it suggests to me a snapshot. Also, lighting is a bit too harsh. |
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| 10/14/2004 12:24:53 PM |
Eyesby faidoiComment: I don't particularly find these eyes attractive or interesting, but find them to look weird. There is no color and both eyes lack detail. In addition, I don't like your treatment of the right eye. I can not visualize the pupil and it's got two catchlights compared with the one for the left side. I guess you could say that eyes are defining features for different people, but unless your intent was to display oddity, I don' t think you've accomplished your goal. One thing that I think could have helped is to reduce the harsh lighting in favor of more diffuse lighting. I hope this helped. |
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| 10/14/2004 12:10:57 PM |
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| 10/14/2004 12:00:14 PM |
Mr. Mischieviousby JesuispeureComment: Looks a bit soft, but probably from subject movement. Interesting portrait subject and the vibrant colors and angles of the background support the energy of this person. Nice job. |
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| 10/14/2004 11:53:51 AM |
Rough around the edgesby ws6_taComment: Finally, a picture that really captures the challenge theme. Really great sharpness and detail. In addition to the gruffy appearance of your subject, you suggest his occupation (construction?) by inclusion of what looks like a hard hat. What is most striking about this portrait is his eyes and gaze. Only criticism I have is maybe to have the background wall less defined with a more narrow DOF. Well done. |
| 10/13/2004 06:54:19 AM |
Natalie's Eyes: Compassionby SandyPComment: I like the composition/close up, but find that the image is a bit too dark and there's no "pop" in the eyes. They lack catch-light. In addition, I think you've used a noise reduction program a little too stronly here. Would have preferred to see more detail in the skin. |
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| 10/12/2004 08:33:08 PM |
her glow...by melongrindComment: Great subject, but ugly background. If you couldn't move her to a different, more appealing location, then I wish you would have blurred the background more with a narrow DOF. |
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| 10/12/2004 08:31:06 PM |
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| 10/12/2004 12:47:51 PM |
Resourceful Redheadby dsidwellComment: The red of her hair is certainly vibrant, but I think you should have given that more attention and more space in the image, as right now, it seems that the eyes are the most attention getting. Yet, there's something weird looking about her left eye (not sure what that is, though). Also, I don't like the bleached look of the skin around the eyes and forehead as it has no detail. |
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