Transparent Transparency
by Altastic

Comment:
Critique Club

Initial impression: classic subject

Composition: Simple, which I think often works well. An angular presentation of the glasses would likely add to the visual interest. Particularly if it were in parallel with the edge of the table, creating three sections to the photograph. I think this is the main component that would add to visual impact and interest.

Color is fine, WB appears to be fine as well. Lighting works, but is a bit dull in that it is not adding to the emotion or supporting the subject.

Subject is on point for the challenge, I think the composition and lighting kept the score on the lower end. Still life is difficult, particularly for me! Congrats on the camera. I really like your onion shot on your flickr page. That's the kind of lighting that would have added to this image. If you are interested, I just finished a great book on composition that you may enjoy. PM me and I'll send a link.

Cheers,

Ben

Life outdoors.
by phase3

Comment:
Detail is good, striking harsh light, interesting subject

Launch!
by socalsteve

Comment:
Good stuff Steve. Captured the essence of science fiction.

for Jon - Death is Not the End
by Retroesque

Comment:
Lovely composition. I particularly enjoy the movement from the bokeh, pushing me to the path that leads to the empty pier. Touching tribute. Thanks for sharing. Ben

reflection
by Retroesque

Comment:
Very good. I love the feel that you are expressing, particularly with the color.

SeaTac Airport
by pjangel

Comment:
No to shabby for a camera phone. You captured the curves well.

Snoqualmie Falls
by pjangel

Comment:
Now is it that the full frame iPhone?

Hindu Reverie
by knowvak

Comment:
Critique Club

Overall, I find the subject interesting, but just an OK photograph. As pointed out in the comments, the composition is not supporting the subject, particularly since the focus appears off. I would suggest playing with the crop, maybe a bit less negative space. I really enjoy the lighting that brings out the textures, nice work. Color and WB appear to be good, and it certainly meets the challenge.

Cheers,
Ben

Peace
by Rino63

Comment:
Critique Club

I have nothing to offer from a technical stand point, other than the area in focus takes away from the overal soft feeling, see below.

To me this is a piece of art, so I will tell you what I like. The composition is fantastic, with the lower portion dominating the initial experience but supported by the moon (at least I view it as a moon). Very soothing, peaceful color with soft contrast. Very well done.

Cheers,

Ben

Iconic Love Story
by pointandshoot

Comment:
Yeah, this is spectacular.