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01/11/2009 11:10:15 PM |
Critique Club
Overall, I find the subject interesting, but just an OK photograph. As pointed out in the comments, the composition is not supporting the subject, particularly since the focus appears off. I would suggest playing with the crop, maybe a bit less negative space. I really enjoy the lighting that brings out the textures, nice work. Color and WB appear to be good, and it certainly meets the challenge.
Cheers,
Ben |
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12/31/2008 03:47:50 PM |
| like the shadows and how you off set the face.. |
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12/31/2008 01:10:36 PM |
| Great composition and lighting. 8 |
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12/31/2008 03:56:00 AM |
| Good side lighting. The composition could have been different as the subjects looks cornered though |
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12/31/2008 01:39:21 AM |
| nice lighting it really brings out the textures |
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12/30/2008 09:08:03 PM |
| Low light problems with focus. |
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12/30/2008 01:20:08 AM |
| very spirtual, cool lighting |
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12/29/2008 06:48:58 PM |
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12/29/2008 11:31:08 AM |
| Great lighting, really brings out the texture. |
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