Point
by Lydia

Comment:
I like very much the shade in the sky, it adds depth. I hate the lamps, along with cctv cams are really a bane for architectural shots. Very good image.

One Man's Home is Another Man's Treasure
by nickyb

Comment:
Lovely. I am curious to find out about how this was shot.

violin head
by jcb007

Comment:
Interesting. I wonder if removing the pegboxes and/or taking a frontal angle, rather than one fro the upper right, would have made for a better image. That particular kind of glossy, dark material in the egs and keyboard is always a bit tricky to manage and the loss of detail due to the shallow, but not quite, DOF detracts a bit from the image. Possibly, putting the pegboxes completely out of focus or focussing on these while blurring the rest would have worked. Or possibly a polarizer on lens or flash to kill the highlights while keeping contrast.(not sure if it works on laquired wood reflections, though..)

Uncurling
by fud10

Comment:
Good idea. I think more even perhaps frontal, lighting would have helped. Given the subject, being able to see more fine detail would be a considerable plus.

pomeriggio d' inattività
by tanguera

Comment:
Nice image. I feel a bit more fill light for the shadow and/or no blown highlights (particularly on the grapes, that shade of red whashes out quite easily when overexposing) would have improved the image. Also, I think the balance would be much better without the left arm in sight. Very nice light.

Kait
by PennyStreet

Comment:
Nice high key, I love the tone. The black point and dense shadows work well here because of the subject tones and complexion. The hint of square in the background works very well in leading to the subject, much better than a uniform background would have. Is this a very subtle tritone or pure grayscale?

All rules should be edible
by hajeka

Comment:
Funny :) What about a reflector on the right side and/or a diffuser to soften the shadows a bit? Also, I wonder how a 'from the top' angle would have worked.

Head in the clouds
by Neat

Comment:
Nice idea. If there was wind, allowing for a slower shutter speed to blur the vegetation while keeping the subject sharp could have made for a different but still interesting image and enhance the feeling the boy is lost in his thoughts.

Blue Suede Shoes...
by thrumyiis

Comment:
Interesting, more detail in the highlights (e.g. underexposing for the flowers) would have helped, I think. Composition is good.

Caught in a Spiderweb
by MaryO

Comment:
I like it. While the blown highlights certainly contribute to the 'sunny day' feeling, a bit more detail in the leaves would have been pleasant. If the dark border on the left side would have extended to the bottom, it would have helped mimicking the shape of the golden spiral. I wonder if changing ange would have allowed that.