Gone Awry
by ClubJuggle

Comment:
we have built our entire society on these all too fallible machines. how could this shot be improved? difficult to say. i think a shot of a computer screen may not be the most dramatic way to have gone.. but since you did, maybe another small controlled lightsource on the person showing their emotion more clearly? i give this shot an 8. mag99.

The Farmer's Friend
by Gekker

Comment:
please take these comments as purely constructive in intent. this is not a very interesting pic .. has some lighting (too dark), angle (strange above off-center shot), cropping, and focus issues.. doesnt scream tech either, although i can see how you might have thought it would work. prolbably the most effective thing you could have done was light it with some drama, and maybe put some farm related things around it, like veggies or grains or something. . mag99

Flash of the Blades
by inspzil

Comment:
holy mackerel. 3 blades???! this is like better than faster than light travel! no, seriously, i like the glint. has a real 'face the morning' intrepid kind of feel. could be an ad :). 7. mag99.

To Boldly Go Where No One Has Gone Before ...
by magnetic9999

Comment:
thanks for the votes. i know this shot is busy but i i thought the subject matter might be strong enough to over come the composition.

Woodless Pencils
by BigSmiles

Comment:
im sorry i didnt leave a comment but i gave this an 8 : )

Meters
by Gordon

Comment:
good compo, classic receding repetition, i like the in focus foreground and the diagonal progression. the subject itself doesn't carry a lot of emotional impact for me. maybe if u had used the title to tie it into the price we all pay for our techo-consumerism or something? 7. mag99

Reaching for Technology
by boyte1

Comment:
the only prob is every time i buy the latest greatest tech, it's always obsolete! mag99

1 / 0 , The Binary Paradigm
by jjbeguin

Comment:
i give this an 8 for concept and composition. lighting is uninteresting, tho. otherwise could have been a 10. looks like u used on-camera flash? mag99

Hornet
by Mieka

Comment:
he's a bug. he might sting you. bzz bzzz bzzz.

i think it's a littttle bit dark .. needs more DOF (try a smaller aper : )). . .

mag99

Look! I've got one, too!
by TheIncredulousJoe

Comment:
too blurry