Golden Sunrays
by sherpet

Comment:
This is a lovely shot with wonderful lighting and nice control of exposure. I love the light rays and the mood set. It almost makes me fell a cool morning breeze. Nicely captured.

mighty aphrodite
by Skip

Comment:
This is a fantastic shot. Very well focused and amazing color and clarity. Congrats on teh Ribbon as well.

Edit to add WTF is with the 1? DPC who can ever tell.

Message edited by author 2006-08-18 14:19:35.

From Prehistoric Times
by JOHNBOY1970

Comment:
I like the shot and the perspective, but it appears to be a little flat. Not sure if a contrast and bump in saturation would help or just make it look over processed but its definately a nice shot.

antenna.jpg
by dragonlady

Comment:
What an interesting view of such a simple object. Wonderfully edited and cropped. I like it.

R E A L G O N E
by Nald

Comment:
While this is a nice photo its not stopped motion, its very good panning though, and I like the angle.

Do these flowers make my nose look big?
by puzzled

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club. I have search over your photo and have some ideas for you. My first thoughts on this is that I'm not sure its abstract food as much as its food art. Nicely done though. I love the creativity of the setup. The angle of the food and the camera make the f4 dof a little shallow and you are losing some sharpness on the right side of the photo. The colors are pretty good, you might try bumping the contrast and the saturation just a touch. But other then that I cant add much else. Good luck with other challenges.

Pasta Colorata Spirale
by pearlseyes

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club. After looking over your photo I have some comments I'd like to share. First let me say that I love the colors of the photo. Great job of picking your subject and their colors. Nice choice of using natural lighting to light the subject. I like the angle at which you chose to shoot it at. I'm not too sure I like the crop of the photo would like to see a taller vertical crop, it may help the look or hurt, hard to say without seeing. Just an idea. I'd also like to see the foreground in the lower right a bit more in focus. It seems a bit soft. Add a little contrast and some saturation to help with the "pop" factor and I think you add more to your even impressive score. Nicely done overall fit the challenge very well.

spaghetti
by alpharich

Comment:
Greeting from the critique club. I have looked over your photo and have a few suggestions. First off I do like the dof use here, and the angle for your photo. I would suggest next time possibly coloring the pasta to add a splash of color to the photo. I'd also suggest a change in the background color. Something white or black to help the subject stand out. Pretty good and even lighting all across the photo. Overall well done. Good luck in future challenges.

nature's rays
by Rikki

Comment:
Greeting from the critique club. Geeze as many ribbons as you have you still want a critique? You should be doing these not asking for them. I'm really not sure what I can do to help you better this shot. Nice focus, nice dof use, excellent lighting as well. COngrats on the Ribbon.

Red, white & blue
by Arti-Elvi

Comment:
I know this is nitpicking, but isnt that cone Orange? I do like the sidelighting and the colors. Not sure about that title.