a boy & his dog
by melodee

Comment:
It's a moderatley interesting portrait, but it's link to the challenge (which specified actual cheese) isn't there. It also looks quite washed out as a B&W... I wonder if you couldn't have added more contrast in the post processing (or left it color).

Try harder!
by psychephylax

Comment:
This is just a great photo. The scene is just so whimsical and cute. The sharpness and detail are incredible. This photo tells a story, and even if it is a comedy instead of the moody dramas preferred by DPC, I love it. 10!

You Are What You Eat!
by manic35

Comment:
I know this scene all too well! :)

I love the white, the negative space... I love his eyes neatly in a 'rule of thirds' intersection. I love everything about this photo. You can't improve on perfection! 10!

On Dangerous Ground
by fadedbeauty

Comment:
This is just a phenominal photograph. The sharpness is just incredible on the mouse and the central mouse trap and the colors are just incredible. Great job, I can't imagine how to improve it. 10!

Grilled Cheese Step Two
by Twyla

Comment:
It's a cute idea, but it suffers from some technical challenges to make it really come through to the viewer.

1) I would have used deli sliced cheese (or even sliced your own off a loaf of velveeta) to make the cheese itself look more attractive.
2) Clean up the crumbs from the plate.
3) The lighting is poor, get rid of the shadows!
4) Nothing is critically sharp or really in focus. Use focus to draw the viewer to what you want them to see.

I hope these comments help.

Document retrieval
by jpdeloof

Comment:
I have NO idea what this has to do with cheese.

CHEESE, Without warning!
by palmfrodur

Comment:
Tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class.

Cannibal smile
by esaintpi

Comment:
Tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class. Also, it's rather unsettling.

oohhhh...cheese again!!!
by meca

Comment:
Tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class.

Mazatlan Dancer
by ecorrus

Comment:
Tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class.