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by sevilduvarci

Comment:
I really like the silvery look of her skin; what a wonderful image. I like the teeth, too; I can almost hear a sob coming out of her mouth. Another image with a strong story.

Day 10 - Ev half faced portrait number 2
by jonfrommk

Comment:
Great tonal ranges here; I haven't been here from the beginning, though (I started late and only breezed through the initial pages). What have I missed?

8
by mia67

Comment:
Brilliant. Such emphasis on the butterfly while playing down the other elements (even the flower), which throws all the attention on your subject. The diagonal lines work great, as does the composition as a whole. Nicely done!

eight/thirty
by UNCLEBRO

Comment:
This is a really nice image; I don't have much to add, unfortunately, as everyone's said it's nice and sharp and has great range. Did you shoot in B&W or was this a conversion, and if the latter, do you mind if I ask which method you used?

Could you hurry up, Louise?
by Alicia

Comment:
I love what you've captured with this images, and how you can see so clearly that you can present to us what you've seen. Wonderful tones, not afraid to leave the highlights in place (diners almost always have windows like those, bright sun coming in, and you've captured it perfectly), and wonderfully composed. Nice.

Day-9-BW-j-taime.jpg
by JerseyGenie

Comment:
I think the processing is fine, too, though you may want to play with toning this (I think toned wedding pictures, in a light sepia or split tone, are awesome, but that can be a very personal preference). As for the focus, softness can give a nice feel of movement to an image, but I agree that increasing the f-stop (which I'm pretty sure you can do with the powershot g5) to get more in focus here, or maybe picking up the shutter speed by one, would give it a bit more clarity while not losing the movement. Lovely moment that you've captured!

The Flower Fairy (Day 8)
by colorcarnival

Comment:
Wonderful story, and great shot, nicely conceived and composed. One possible suggestion: I like to see some adjustments to the colors in selective desats; either going a bit brighter through selecting the colored bits and playing with levels/curves on a new layer, or by muting them in the same way. Hope the planting went well (want to come to my house when you're done? I hate planting, and it shows in my poor garden)!

The Fabric Flower
by Kliopatra

Comment:
I promised to come and comment on your image (in the scores thread), so here I am :) I am in "critique mode," so please don't take anything I write as being overly critical; they are just my observations and opinion, and I am being intentionally critical (much more so than I might normally be) so that it is hopefully helpful!

Okay, initially, the focus on this is very, very soft, and much of the image actually looks out of focus. This is possibly the biggest issue voters had with the shot. DPC voters like sharp, crisp focus. If you look at the winners in any challenge, they are all sharp without being too sharp; it's one of the hallmarks of a winning shot here. You would probably have needed to use a higher aperture to bring more of the shot into focus and avoid the overall soft appearance you have here. There should be a way to do that with your camera (it might require you shooting in landscape mode or something similar, or you might be able to manually choose the aperture).

It also appears this is a "setup" shot, that is, something you've specifically put together for the challenge and photographed. Because there are so many excellent photographers on DPC with advanced photographic studios and lighting, setup shots generally need to be near perfect technically. They need to be very well composed, focused, and well lit. I tend not to do setup shots because they are so competitive. Here, the focus issues come up again, and while the mirrors are present, the composition/crop of the shot minimizes them to a certain degree. The colors, while bright, are not really vibrant. Some work in processing to add saturation or play with curves/contrast might give the image more impact.

I hope these two points help you see some of what I saw in your image (and maybe what some other voters might have seen). You have a good eye for what is visually interesting, and with some more attention to how you shoot and processing for impact after, your scores will steadily improve here. Good luck!

In To My Soul
by SaraR

Comment:
Congratulations, Sara, looks like you were right to be so upbeat throughout the challenge (on the scores thread; I was really waiting to see which shot was yours, there were so many good ones in this challenge). Great subject, wonderfully shot, and perfectly presented. Definitely deserving of your blue!

I'm over here, Mom!
by Melethia

Comment:
I had to come back and see this. I'm so pleased this was your shot, Deb. I gave you a ten on this, and am really surprised and somewhat mystified that it didn't do better. I can't explain it. It was so perfectly seen, captured and presented, and such a unique take on the challenge. Oh, that's it! Unique. Silly person, thinking a unique and thoughtful take on a challenge was a good idea (just joking). Anyway, I love it.