Kelowna Dock
by ajstonge

Comment:
Could use somethign to help the balance....perhaps some off-centering would be called into order here. The clouds are so washed out here, I would think about doing a horizontal instead of a vertical composition and use the rule of thirds. Just my two cents. :)

Bridge into Darkness
by nemesise1977

Comment:
You know, the perspective is fine...but the part at the bottom takes away from the composition. I understand it's physically there, but perhaps you could position yourself in a way that the rest of these...they appear to be steal beams are recognized completely in perspective.

_Everything Is Bigger In Hawaii_
by racha

Comment:
Whatever that is on the right (looks like a trash bin) whether by flash or sunlight is too just bright and distracting, particularlyin comparison to the rest of the composition.

Shuffle Board
by Man_Called_Horse

Comment:
Love the perspective on this..but I think the focus may need to be reversed. It would probably be more idea to have the puck more in focus and the people more out of focus.

Not Forgotten
by Links 2 3 4

Comment:
I've seen several of these photographs, but this is the best one I've seen so far. It's taking perspective and not making it so obvious...and therefore makes it more meaningful.

Bug's life: THE END
by LevT

Comment:
Okay. This is just downright funny.

Ozymandias
by trtfeasor

Comment:
Hey there...this is suffering from a couple of things...first of all...the photo is tilted. Don't be afraid to modify your faming after a shot. Second is a lack of just...focus...there's no mean or rhyme to the composition. It's slightly off-centered, and there's something...looks like part of a dock coming off the bottom of your photo. Cropping that out and following the rules of 1/3..or even just 1/2 would be a huge improvement.

entertwined
by violeta

Comment:
One recommendation...turn off your clock setting on your camera. :)

DESERTED
by fotobug

Comment:
Actually, I just have a question for you...what sort of camera are you using (is it digital), what sort of IR/red filter are you using, and what's the aperture/exposure time on something like this?

autumn walk
by stphq

Comment:
This just seems to suffer from too much light filtering through, and not enough focus. Would recommend using a tripod and playing with your settings to get a better lighting condition. Your foliage will turn out all the better for it. :)