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Black and Gold Honey Bee
08/05/2006 02:46:26 PM
Black and Gold Honey Bee
by temba

Comment:
** Critique Club **

Greetings!

its a very well composed picture, the colors are nice.

subject: the bee looking away from the lens doesn't make it. doesn't add interest. Also the dof is very shallow. It does help in the smooth bokeh, but makes majority of the image out of focus with subject, not to catchy.

I would have framed it tighter so that I avoid the out of focus flower ( keep it some, but not all ) which will also bring more attention to your subejct. at this time the pink color of the flower draws a lot of viewer attention which you don't want.

if you have any questions, please feel free to pm me

thanks,
Gaurawa
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Very Young, Very Golden
08/04/2006 01:04:12 AM
Very Young, Very Golden
by magnus

Comment:
** Critique Club **

Greetings!

A lovely image captured. Technically you were able to achieve what you wanted, the reflector did soften the shadows, but the reflection in Kira eyes need to be cloned out, it doesn't look any good.

Also there is still some part of her face blown out, you may want to reduce your exposure, and move your reflector closer to lighten the shadows more, to be able to avoid blown out parts.

Challenge: It doesn't fit the challenge very well, not enough gold for the voters and its directly reflected in the votes received.

if you have any questions, please feel free to pm me

thanks,
Gaurawa
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Lovers
08/02/2006 06:30:25 PM
Lovers
by MacDonald

Comment:
** Critique Club **

Greetings!

Lovely image, well composed and the colors are great. Technically, its well shot, the colors in sky and silhoutte are captured nicely, the reflection in the foreground adds interest.

I agree with the comment about sun emerging from the back of the person. I would have definitely liked it to be hidden behind or in between the couple and not behind him.

if you have any questions, feel free to pm me

thanks,
Gaurawa

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Dome
08/02/2006 03:00:41 PM
Dome
by matispista

Comment:
** Critique Club **

Greetings!

I like the way you have used the lines from the building top. the hue on the gold and sky seems to be off though. the sky has a very dull feel to it. Also the gold can be enhanced with minor color correction edits.

I don't think that you can remove the blown out region on left due to sun. To avoid this, you may want to shoot at evening or morning, also that would add to the overall photo by a warm sky tones.

if you have any questions, feel free to pm me.

thanks,
Gaurawa
Basking in the Reflected Glory of a Golden Victory
08/02/2006 02:44:24 PM
Basking in the Reflected Glory of a Golden Victory
by Shy Clicker

Comment:
** Critique Club **

Greetings!

Photograph: Well taken, the title is very appropriate and technically, its very well captured.

Challenge : the challenge was Gold, and I am sure not many people will find enough gold in this picture, there is are more colors in this picture which fight for attention, which I believe is the reason for a lower score.

Overall, a well taken photograph which doesn't meet the challenge very well.

if you have any questions, please feel free to pm me.

thanks,
Gaurawa
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Golden Jester
08/02/2006 02:37:39 PM
Golden Jester
by lifternessjt

Comment:
** Critique Club **

Greetings!

My very first impression was that the image looks very ordinary, its a snapshot look and not a well thought out capture.

the reason, I think is that the subject is not accentuated in this capture, but its rather mixed up with its surroundings. Also the photo takes away from the moving sense, they you have composed it. its a bit too centered, I would keep some more room on a side to make it more dynamic.

also since its advanced editing, I think it could benefit from some vignetting.

if you have any questions regarding this, please feel free to pm me.

thanks,
Gaurawa

Photographer found comment helpful.
IMGP8199-01.jpg
07/31/2006 11:59:05 AM
IMGP8199-01.jpg
by faidoi

Comment:
Nicely done. I like the way sky is totally white, no details, the colors pop very well
Photographer found comment helpful.
Green Shield
07/31/2006 01:58:56 AM
Green Shield
by mrmorris

Comment:
that's a great macro shot. best of luck in the challenge
Photographer found comment helpful.
colorsofgreen.jpg
07/28/2006 11:00:28 AM
colorsofgreen.jpg
by vikas

Comment:
I saw this on flickr and thought you are going to use this for color on color, but its your portfolio, do you have something for the challenge too ?
Photographer found comment helpful.
Sun Set - Mumbai
07/28/2006 10:58:06 AM
Sun Set - Mumbai
by abhinavsah

Comment:
..and here you are with a bang!
A great image and a tremendous start, good to see you here
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