Nina-Marie (4306 resized).jpg
by albc28

Comment:
I like this image for the overall feel, but this has flaws
- Its tilted to the right, the model looks ackward with this tilt
- focus is not sharp on her face, a shallower dof would sure help

Simply Beautiful
by Kandy Kane

Comment:
this is high key image. I don't see how this works for high contrast.

Joyful
by idnic

Comment:
Cindi ?

Aila Kern.jpg
by Dragonphenx

Comment:
That's a nice picture. You may want to include some corners in your pictures to add more interest to it.. like taking this picture from somewhat right so that you can use the right top corner...

Acacia.JPG
by Dragonphenx

Comment:
edited to elaborate on my comment

You will need to work on composition. remove distracting elements so that the attention is fixed on the subject only. the left top sky is one major distraction. Also a shallower dof will work much better here as background detail is not needed. I would prefer a tighter crop or more room, this somehow doesn't look balanced to me...

Message edited by author 2006-09-20 21:16:36.

Hannah by the beach 1.jpg
by Dragonphenx

Comment:
That's a nice capture. Its not properly exposed for her face though. With this framing, the face occupies very small area and camera will not meter right. You want to spot meter the face, fix the exposure and frame, shoot

Family Transport
by Falc

Comment:
Nicely done. A great panning shot

Waiting For The Sun
by Tej

Comment:
which beach is it Tej ? the clouds are amazing

Creation and Creator
by Tej

Comment:
lovely colors and reflection.

Fragile
by arpita

Comment:
Badhai ho!