Family Circle....week 44 of PAW
by njsabs

Comment:
I think it's beautiful!!

You are talented! :D

by yanko

Comment:
love love love!

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by Retroesque

Comment:
haha this is awesome!!! great job :D

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by hanneke

Comment:
no it's photoshop work, I couldn't manage to get one good photo, and by coincedence I got this and went further with it :)

Thanks!

Mocksi Brown
by Jason_Cross

Comment:
I love this!! Gonna try it too :P

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by hanneke

Comment:
thanks!

I'm hoping to catch up the next couple of weeks... it's getting hard now because the studio was out for a while and I fell way behind. But I'm back!! :D

John's Funny Face
by Spongetoast

Comment:
Hi, this is a comment from the critique club!

The expression of your buddy is pretty cute, but my experience learned that expressions like these don't really work here in challenges; this way it looks more like a snapshot.

The thing with challenges is also that you need to see the technique or subject in the entry what the challenge is about. I don't see "overexposed" in your photo, only the background, and that might just be in a studio.

Good luck in photography, I see in your other entries you have a good eye for good moments!!

Fiery
by zackdezon

Comment:
Hi, this is a comment from the critique club!

Yes, this is overexposed. But looking at your portfolio I think you can do better ;)

The overexposed part almost has no detail left, while you could've done that and still remaining details. Also the half overexposed - half done right might be a bit too obvious, play with the lights and find out how you can do it in a different way.

The colors of your eyes are great though, they really pop out of the photo. Are they as blue like this in real life too? ;)

Hope this was a little helpful :)

Boss
by IreneM

Comment:
Congrats again Irene!

I love the colored spray-tube in the empty side of the bottle.

One small piece of critique: the O of the brand "BOSS" isn't visible enough for me. For an ad-shot like this (used as a real ad) I think that would be better.

But who gives a .... ;)

Got milk?
by mknace

Comment:
Hi, this is a comment from the critique club!

First of all, cute subject!

I like the fact that you used 2 flashes, that means you're trying to make more out of it than a snapshot.

The light is pretty uneven. The shadows and highlights, close together, are almost like pure black and pure white. The fact that you used a flash at the left makes that effect even stronger. You might want to try to use the flash at the other side (with this photo) so the extra light can fill in the shadows (for example behind the bottle and at the shirt) The build-in flash is one you might want to avoid. It's harsh and gives harsh shadows.

I hope this comment was helpful for you!