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Challenge: Overexposed (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D70s
Lens: Tamron SP AF 17-50mm f/2.8 Di II LD Aspherical (IF) for Nikon
Location: Gelang Patah
Date: Aug 29, 2008
Aperture: f5.6
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Portraiture, Children
Date Uploaded: Aug 31, 2008

Using built in flash + SB600 from left
Cropped
B&W conversion using Channel mixer
Level

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Place: 115 out of 183
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Votes: 180
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09/15/2008 03:49:22 PM
Hi, this is a comment from the critique club!

First of all, cute subject!

I like the fact that you used 2 flashes, that means you're trying to make more out of it than a snapshot.

The light is pretty uneven. The shadows and highlights, close together, are almost like pure black and pure white. The fact that you used a flash at the left makes that effect even stronger. You might want to try to use the flash at the other side (with this photo) so the extra light can fill in the shadows (for example behind the bottle and at the shirt) The build-in flash is one you might want to avoid. It's harsh and gives harsh shadows.

I hope this comment was helpful for you!
 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/09/2008 09:13:31 PM
Cute composition.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/03/2008 03:31:05 PM
Unevenly exposed, which means some over and some under. Nice looking subject though.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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