Time In Motion
by kposey

Comment:
I don't understand the framing of this shot. The clock is centered horizontally yet fills only the middle third of the frame. Vertically the top of the clock is cut off. Taking this shot with a portrait orientation might have been a good idea, or else an off center subject placement might have helped. This shot still needs something else to give it some oomf though, as it currently comes off as a rather dull shot. A unique angle, framing, or close up could all help create a less generic appearance. 2

Foggy Mist
by Marla

Comment:
The colors in this shot are great. I love the green tones with the spike of blue down the middle and the blue haze hanging over. Great framing and neat shot. Must have been beautiful to see first hand. 7

Tick Tock
by jab119

Comment:
I'd either tighten the crop on top to come right to the edge of the clock, or give a little bit of space between the clock and the edge of the frame at the bottom. In fact, a closer view, perhaps only showing half or a fourth of the clock might have added to the snese of motion and overall uniqueness of the shot. I like the lighting and the white clock on black backdrop. Overall nice shot. 6

Motion in Negative
by dimitrii

Comment:
I don't think the negative effect works well with this shot. 2

E-Motion
by kandyj

Comment:
Pretty good portrait. The background seems a little distracting, and the subject isn't particularly interesting to me. 5

Moving by night, sleeping by day
by psychephylax

Comment:
Great shot, but doesn't show motion or convey a sense of motion or really have anything to do with motion (dispite the efforts of the title). 3

yeah... we lost again.
by awmk1981

Comment:
I like the subject of the shot, but it doesn\'t really convey any significant motion. The motion taking place is insignificant. The shot is a little dark, and putting the subject dead center doesn\'t seem like the best composition for this. Perhaps if he were at the far right side with the field laid out before him it would be more interesting. And while I'm sure it was unavoidable, the net hanging in front of him is distracting. This shot needs some technical improvement, but it has a lot of potential to it. Good luck to you. 3

Good Vibration
by Harz_Joerg

Comment:
Great idea. Nice angle. 8

Mosquito
by amonteforte

Comment:
This is rather cluttered and it's difficult to determine what the subject is. 3 wingy

Look! I've got one, too!
by TheIncredulousJoe

Comment:
Needs to be in better focus. A different crop would be a good idea, the subject placement just seems random here.