Downtown
by ursula

Comment:
The top left image looks over cropped (blurry, low resolution). The top left, and bottom images are somewhat interesting, although not particularly drawing. However, the top right image is excelent. The curves and lines work quite effectively in it, and I think it would be better as a stand alone image than this is as a multi-image.

In the Blink of an Eye
by StevePax

Comment:
The colors here look washed out and the eye isn't in sharp focus. The concept has some potential, but the presentation lacks oomph. I'd have tried different angles and probably more dramatic lighting, as this ends up rather drab.

Story of a portrait
by bcncrazy

Comment:
I like the first frame, but I think the other two are less effective. I think this concept would be better illustrated if the final frame were a normal looking portrait, as this one still ends up looking unfinished.

Another Time
by Tarbini

Comment:
This really strikes me as a single frame shot that was forced into a multi-frame format. I don't really see much purpose in dividing it up. I do like the sort of hazy oversaturated effect you have created here. It gives it a dreamlike feel. 6

golf
by buzzrock

Comment:
The first shot seems like an awkward fit for the sequence, since the other two shots have the same perspective but the first is different (without any particular reason for being different). Also each of these shots are really too small to be effective.. with such limited space in the first place, you might have been better off using a much smaller boarder.

Dream Cars
by orussell

Comment:
Heh.. how did a toyota celica get in there with two porsches?

Know your beneficial insects: Flies in Green, Gold and Blue
by Budweezer

Comment:
The top images would look better if they were the same height. It kills the balance and symmetry by making the right side jut out into the bottom shot.

Triptych Tulipiana
by Jak

Comment:
Interesting lighting.. but it has an overprocessed look to it.

Oriental Breeze
by bruster54

Comment:
I really like the center frame and how it shows up in minimalist ways only, however, it doesn't really fit into the tone of this sequence very well, since the other two show up very clearly and strongly. I think putting the center shot against a white background would have created an interesting contrast with the other two shots, but still maintained the same tone as the other shots. 7

Three Stages of Mr. Potato Head
by deckyon

Comment:
I suppose these shots are intended to have a candid feel to them, but the result isn't very visually appealing. The cluttered background and pretty much expressionless child detract from the shot. The Mr.Potato Head concept was a good idea, and if you had simplified the shot and done close up shots of different stages of potato head construction I think the result would have been very interesting.