Cat Girl
by Kita

Comment:
Cute girl and kitty. The clothes are a tad oversharpened/too bright.

I'm Too Sexy...
by Remington

Comment:
How about "Barbie bares her boobs"?

Make-Up: Alluring Deception
by Coral

Comment:
Sorry but I don't find this alluring, but that is just me. Her lip color appears smudged and with the expression, she almost seems injured or hurt.

New Fashion Trend
by Nikolai1024

Comment:
ok..........

Nadine
by gloda

Comment:
Just too much clothing to take in!

piazza sempione
by kiwiness

Comment:
Note the angle of her front leg....it's distorted by the angle of the shot, making her leg look larger thank it probably is. Since the other leg is tucked, the boots are really not necessary....cutting her leg line. Another distraction from the shot is the couch line and the red background....it cuts into the shot also. Nice sultry look but the lighting is uneven on her eyes. Also the angle of her right hand is too severe, making it appear more detached from her arm

Sun Rise
by maximus69

Comment:
Fashion?

Simply Glowing!
by Spartan151

Comment:
Too much glow....very distracting

Accessor'eyes'
by -Bec-

Comment:
In a fashion shot, you need a focal point....what are you trying to "sell". The eyes? The necklace? The eye makeup is cool and you could make this more edgy had you concentrated on more on her eyes and didn't have the severe sideways glance happening. I could see this as a standing shot, shoulders rolled back or forward, facing into a fan blowing her hair back and the face 3/4 turned, over her shoulder. That would display the make-up and the necklace, even tho the makeup is enough. This, of course, is all MHO.

Shoes for 2
by leavingmyself

Comment:
The lighting is so uneven and it makes the shot very flat.