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Tunnel into darkness
07/06/2005 02:54:42 AM
Tunnel into darkness
by Emmy

Comment:
The colors are great, as is the lighting. If this was a prop, or set up image, I would suggest that next time you take the time to look for things like dust and hairs, like the one along the right edge of the frame. Not a biggie, but it is the little details that make the difference between a good image, and a great image.
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View through a circle
07/06/2005 02:49:01 AM
View through a circle
by mariegbeve

Comment:
very unique idea. I would suggest cropping just enough off the bottom to remove the bright blurry object near the center bottom. Without that distraction there, the eyes look at the rest of the image, as opposed to being drawn to that bright thing at the bottom.
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Big Circles and Little Circles and...
07/06/2005 02:40:17 AM
Big Circles and Little Circles and...
by chesire

Comment:
it seems to me that your focus is a bit off. Really like the idea for the image, just whish it was in sharper focus.
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Feng Shui
07/06/2005 02:38:35 AM
Feng Shui
by dockie

Comment:
This photo seems very 'cluttered' or busy to me. You have so many elements, it is hard to know where to look. I would suggest some cropping to focus in on one major element, perhaps the center chair (?) by cropping the right side with the window and person in it off, as well as the mirror ball on the left.
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Circles of Life
07/06/2005 02:32:57 AM
Circles of Life
by protophoto

Comment:
I would try re-taking this shot, but in a location that did not have the harsh contrast between the sunlight and the shadows, as well as a more flat backdrop, as opposed to the pile of bricks.

The sunlight creates a very stark and high contrast image that could be greatly improved upon with even lighting for the entire subject.
Re-inventing the wheel
07/06/2005 02:29:09 AM
Re-inventing the wheel
by Travis99

Comment:
I would suggest a different point of view so the clutch was not breaking the lines of the tire and disc brake, as well it would improve the backdrop.
Medallions
07/06/2005 02:24:54 AM
Medallions
by kiropractic

Comment:
very nice photo. Would suggest perhaps a more vertical image, as I think the subject is more suited to a vertical point of view. still a great photo tho.
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Man-Made Rainbows
07/06/2005 02:21:32 AM
Man-Made Rainbows
by stickee

Comment:
I like the idea you were going for, but having the cd in focus would help.
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Coal Car
07/01/2005 06:23:13 PM
Coal Car
by Brigid

Comment:
nice subject, but I would suggest a tighter crop - eliminate the un needed 'space' around your image. This will remove the house on the right side, as well as some of the extra forground. With your subject filling the frame more, it will also solve the dead center 'snapshot' look of the photograph.
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The Ore House
07/01/2005 06:18:08 PM
The Ore House
by RDEittreim

Comment:
Very nice building for the subject, but a different point of view would help remove the telephone pole from being dead center infront of the building, detracting fron the overall image. Also, a little bit of cropping on the right side to eliminate the distracting detail would help.
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