Breakfast at Tiffany's
by OFreasier

Comment:
Having the piece go from the black to the white makes it difficult to show the details. The ad itself is original and well centered.

Southwestern
by vtruan

Comment:
Text gets lost. It could of used a black stroke of .5 point to really stand out. I like the font and the piece. The Dof and text mix wonderfully (putting the text in the out of focus area). Edit: I didn't know you can't use a stroke because its against DPC rules. You'd need a diffrent color font or background to get it to stand out. I really like the comp here.

Because You LOVE her
by RayEthier

Comment:
I like what you did here with DOF and placing the text in the out of focus area, i wish more of the necklace was in focus. You probably didn't need to get the whole necklace in but With the comp you used, you'd need a deeper field. The ring makes it crowded and seems out of place. Seperate the two or exclude the ring. I love the text and the font. It really jumps out at you.

Bob's Fine Jewelry
by strangeghost

Comment:
The comp here is fantastic, A different font, consistancy with punctuation (Artist license doesn't extend that far) and more contrast with the ring would be needed to make this a proffesional Ad. Great background and font.

Simple Elegance
by Shannon

Comment:
Wow! Doesn't need text. Great Comp. Necklace Needs to be a touch crisper to be fully effective as an ad. Outstanding job and the borders a nice touch

The One
by jperez1690

Comment:
I love it but the supply would be limited, no? Great comp and lighting and shadows! Very creatve! I like how you placed the text to contrast. You'd do well in advertising.

One Gucci is never enough
by Steveinnz

Comment:
Great photo and ad! Masterful shots like this are so well composed that they don't need text. This tells me exactly what you're selling and it's an image builder as well. To nit pick, the reflection is a bit distracting as I can see you. But one of the most professional in the comp. Outstanding!

Garnet Tennis Bracelet
by shutterfly

Comment:
I almost passed this as I didn't see any text, which leads to my only revise I would suggest (enlarge the text!). This is a great shot and well composed. The marketing in me loves that there's a price listed! This Dof works if the photo were crisper or had more contrast. However, I prefer a deeper one. (DOF)

Bulova for ever..!
by joaquin

Comment:
Wow! very nice. Attention to detail as I believe that you've found the "official Bulova Font" Nice comp and clarity. One small revision i'd suggest is the text on the bottom needs to be larger, capitalized and one word!

Ice
by bruski

Comment:
Nice layout and comp. It needs a different DOF that accentuates the whole ring. Font needs to be in contrast with background to stand out more. Minor revisions that would bring a smile to most ad people. Nice job.