Fantasy
by LanSnake

Comment:
Nice colours! The towel/ carpet background seems at odds with the mags/ books. The composition doesn't balance (for me).
Kavey

Pure Country
by autool

Comment:
Nice collection, nice background, interesting story perhaps?
Composition doesn't grab me but I can't put my finger on why, sorry.
6, Kavey

Celebrities
by psychephylax

Comment:
Great close crop and really good in the detail. Striking shot.
7, Kavey

childhood fascination of little things
by notashamd

Comment:
Eeeuuw :)
Needs more focus and I don't like the background, there's something icky about it. Perhaps that's the intention?
6, Kavey

A Hard Day's Work
by just-married

Comment:
Simple and interesting. Not sure it needs that weird little white scoop, a spade might be better. What's the black line at lower left corner?
I wonder how this would work in portrait, with more space above and below than to left and right?
7, Kavey

The Swing
by jboling

Comment:
I do like the fact you have one of the swings in motion - definitely adds something. I think that the other swings are too obscured by the chains, perhaps a viewpoint just slightly to one side would improve this? I'd also prefer the tops of the A frames to show as they are almost in shot and such a strong shape that my eyes are lead up to where they would be - out of shot!
Kavey

Childhood For Sale!
by akn

Comment:
I like the pram and the floorboards very much.
The cupboard behind it makes the shot feel top heavy. I would prefer if it wasn't partly cropped out.
5, Kavey

The magic of reflection
by joshuazhang

Comment:
As a kid I spent hours looking for patterns in the clouds and in reflections. This is just so beautiful - there is a real abstract feel to it with the white and darker lines on the water surface - the b/w treatment emphasises the abstract feel of it.
9, Kavey

Let's get ready to Rumble!!!
by Yomi

Comment:
Like this but wish I wasn't behind everyone. Would like to have more of them facing me. Perhaps if macho man nearest me stays as he is, but the ones infront of him are facing me?
Also not sure what the grey thing rising up at the back in the middle is?
Good lighting and colour.
5, Kavey

Mom can I go in there?
by warglory

Comment:
Lovely bright colours!
Kavey