Real Simple
by BeingClever

Comment:
Sorry this didn't rank more highly.
I read your detail and curious what you mean when you say phone.
Do you mean photo?
:D
Anyway, nice pic!

Bubble Jelly
by sahko

Comment:
Critique Club


Initial thoughts
Great colours and interesting centred composition.

Composition/ Content
I rather like this � I love the colour palette of blues and whites � very refreshing � reminds me of a minty toothpaste advert.
Bubbles very clear � good lighting. Great texture.

Camera Work - Technical
Well lit, well exposed.

Digital Processing - Technical
Good crop.

Fits The Challenge
Yes � it�s nice to see the qualities of a gel rather than a runny liquid. Though the use of the word �jelly� through me as in UK that�s what we call jello.

My Opinion On The Photo
Like it!

Wheel of Fortune
by crabappl3

Comment:
This could have worked in 'Magazine Cover' - lots of white space (yes I know it's black) for text etc!
I like the composition - it's nice to see just a small study of the wheel, rather than the whole.
I'd like to see the same crop but taken a second later when the carriages are higher and all three are fully in frame.
Nice border choice.
Kavey

Unfurled
by jillz

Comment:
Great colours - obvious I know but that rich blue really looks great against the green. I like the curved lines created by the main petal and the choice of shallow DOF too. I don't like that very dark stem at the left - though the pale green ones at different horizontal angles are pretty cool.

Playing Fields
by Konador

Comment:
Nice feeling of openess - and lovely cloud shapes in the sky - nice light too. The perspective shift (or whatever it's called) on the nearest goal is a little weird, and there's a lot of jagged stepping down the vertical to the far left. Nothing quite exciting enough to really pull me in and keep me looking longer.

'A world off center'
by justine

Comment:
That head looks oddly familiar.

Stuff Magazine - or - Playboy
by DrJOnes

Comment:
Well taken and very well lit.
I must admit to being put off a little by the amount of pubic area showing. I'm sooo not puritanical so it's not that - it just looks really odd in this particular image. I think I'd prefer pubic area covered or completely nude.
However, the part hidden part on display style works much better on the bosom area.
Great background and that beautiful dark sky and greenery really looks good against her skin. Is it real or a photo backdrop? Just curious.
This really isn't my cup of tea but I do think it's very well taken, so giving it a 9.

LIFE
by swaroskji

Comment:
Wow! I think this is excellent - very Jacky Kennedy/ Audrey Hepburn. I like the lighting, the slightly dark feel (dancing outdoors at night?), the way her hair merges into the sky and the candid nature of the expressions. Great also to have captured motion in her arms and in the applause of spectators. Wish she had that reflected light in both eyes though you could add that in before putting this on sale on DPC Prints if you were intending to do that? 10

Cigar Aficionado
by crabappl3

Comment:
Beautiful tendril of smoke, lovely rich colours, good lighting and nice focus. I like that even with magazine text this image would still allow for a feeling of negative space. 10

Cigar Aficionado
by bgmorris

Comment:
Wonderful macro - I really love the tendrils of smoke and the DOF. Only negative for me is composition - too close to centre to be centred but not far enough off centred (for my tastes) to be balanced as an off-centre. 9 (would be 10 with better composition)