Blackened By Mind
by Painiel

Comment:
Interesting dark tunnel...There is defenetly too much floor in photo. Maybe would take picture from side of one of the walls to make it more dinamic.

Perishable
by bjarte

Comment:
Very simple photo...maybe should have taken it in evening when low sun gives it more texture. Just noticed that the straight schraches must be from skates or skies. I would probably go for natural lines and concentrate on spot where they give moust interesting curves.

Sunset Express
by die2board

Comment:
Nice evening photo... interesting colors but it looks somehow bit flat. I think it swould be more interesting if you would took it from level of rails.

spin
by secolibar

Comment:
I must say its very abstract. I like the curves and texture of whatever object it is but that piece of rope feels completely out of the place.

Paralels to infinity
by fs_twister

Comment:
Its nice image...interesting composition but quality bit takes it down. Its taken probably in evening and lack of light made it pretty grainy.

Caution: Crap Crossing
by sabphoto

Comment:
This is one tricky photo...I must say I almoust voted on it like blured which depending on subject is 1-2. Only at last moment I noticed your idea and had to return to change my vote. Sill I think you could have improved your composition. I would keep just half of gutter and maybe more space on right side, to emphasize your object. Or to capture snail in front but from lower level and seeing gutter behind the snail. I wish you good luck, the challenge is to see the snail. Maybe should have gave hint in title.

........and Make a Trail
by mikkiowens

Comment:
It has the major things that photography need object, focus and meet the challenge. Just there is no spirit, no creativity... would like to see photographer to look further then his lens. Nothing personal just my opinion. Keep shoting!

Beauty
by LGalM077

Comment:
I find the place of shoting very interesting...model is also nice. I dont know just why you made it so small and blured...was that intentional? Or the model minded...looks like bit nude. I guess the intention of photograpy is to show it.

Lines Leading to Touchdown Signal
by eaglebeck

Comment:
Seems you used lot of zoom and that might cause trouble with focus. You can use USM but that will halp you only if you have atleast soft focus. Your object is taken from back that also doesnt make picture interesting. Keep shoting!

Chillin in the Japanese Garden
by Kimberly75

Comment:
There is nice composition, it fits the challenge...there is even object but there is no signs of focus. That will take you down. Keep shoting.