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09/26/2006 09:48:57 PM |
| the foreground should be more focused |
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09/26/2006 12:38:25 PM |
| Good line, but the person is a bit blurry. |
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09/26/2006 07:37:08 AM |
| Focus is faulty unfortunately |
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09/26/2006 05:03:21 AM |
| Good use of leading line but the lines should lead to the subject. Being out of focus, the subject is hard for me to look at. Girl should be in focus with leading line soft at right edge. |
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09/24/2006 05:09:49 PM |
| Very nice idea. I think it could be stronger if you switched the focus to the little girl making my eye comfortably lead to her. 6 |
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09/23/2006 05:35:30 PM |
| i am not sure if throwing the boy out of focus works here. |
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09/23/2006 12:59:53 AM |
| Short DOF is distracting. Also a little out of focus. |
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09/22/2006 11:00:40 AM |
| There is nice composition, it fits the challenge...there is even object but there is no signs of focus. That will take you down. Keep shoting. |
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09/21/2006 11:43:56 PM |
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09/21/2006 10:20:56 PM |
| Seems to me that *something* should be in good focus here, preferably the girl since that's what I'm drawn to. As it is, I don't really know what I'm supposed to be looking at. It may have made for an excellent shot had you physically moved over to the right (getting rid of the white blob of stuff at the end of the bridge) with the lines leading to the girl. |
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09/21/2006 02:41:45 PM |
| great composition. I might find this easier to look at if something were in focus, but at the same time I kind of like that I can just make out the child's form, it makes her seem more universal. 7 |
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09/20/2006 10:19:35 AM |
| The line is nice but it leads me to an out of focus subject. Thus I feel as though my journey was for naught. |
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