Browse Comments (StormyWeathers)

08/10/2009 01:31:09 AM

Love the light at sunset....
by StormyWeathers

Comment:
Thank you for taking the time to provide me with some very valuable feedback on my photo of my son. I am trying to learn as much as possible about this so please let me ask you a few additional questions...

1. The crop comment also didn't seam to work for me either but I think the composition could have been stronger and I only did the best with the background given. That being said I will look for better composition when framing the the shot next time.

2. He is very hot in the face and I am wondering what kind of sequence you would use when shooting a shot like this?? I am using a very fast f2 lense and by default usually shoot wide open, especially with my wide angles because DPF isn't really an issue. I see in this case I notice the blur in the face and would correct for this next shot. My question is would you use a spot metering for his face and let the other light levels fall where they may?? What are your thougths?

Thanks,

Stormy Weathers.

PS - I notice that you have a Fujifilm FinePix 2800Z. This is a fairly entry level camera but you have a really good understanding of photography? Do you have other cameras or how did you gain your knowledge of photography?

Originally posted by macrothing:

Critique Club Critique

First Impressions
The light is nice. A bit of a snapshot feel to the image, however the quality and lighting pull it beyond that 'realm'. I gave this a 4 during voting.

Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
Photographic technicals all look to have worked quite well. What would really strengthen this image is a refined crop, or, in retrospect (so as to speak), to be able to 'align' the background behind him, especially the head area, to complement him.

As is, whilst I like the vertical framing and think this does suit this, I think a tighter crop may have given this a little extra. I did try it, but after doing so not sure, it changes the feel of the image. I guess it depends what you were aiming for. The shadow is interesting on the left, but it is 'chopped', the rocks are a nice element, and I like the 'boyhoodness' of his clothing, including his sandals. If the quality is there, this image likely lends itself well to a head and shoulders crop, especially to really showcase that nice catch of light in his eyes.

Comments, Score & Placement Review
373/419 is fairly low down the pack and your score of 4.92 seems a bit harsh for the quality of the image. My only guess (before reading the comments) is that people may not have lingered long enough to appreciate the interesting elements to the image.

All your comments are helpful, one in particular extremely so.

Summary
Of course a personal image, which I'm sure will be treasured, but given a similar opportunity again, just a fraction check on the surroundings and composition and, if possible without ruining 'a moment', some encouragement or direction to allow the boy's character to shine through a little more.