film to digital learning
by spease

Comment:
I'm sorry but I didn't find this very interesting. The dark background didn't help but it may have been better with an open page and some text perhaps? 3

I AM Studying!
by robshookphoto

Comment:
Looks like camera shake and the door in the background has degraded a potentially good image. 3

An apple for teacher...
by jmlelii

Comment:
I like the mono tones. I'm sorry, but I'm not so sure about the pose and the lighting. 3

The 30 second morning dash
by peete

Comment:
Original and well executed

School is fun
by Tiberius

Comment:
Loely range of tones

Om: Know Thyself
by gaurawa

Comment:
Lovely props and use of them - should do well

Hey, Teacher, Leave Those Kids Alone!
by MrYu

Comment:
Like it!

Dictionary
by dogz

Comment:
Simple but lovely and well taken. Good luck

Up she comes!
by sidpixel

Comment:

Originally posted by Imagineer: :: Hello from the Critique Club :: ............................................................ This shot is not as bad as its score indicates. You have interesting subject matter and some lovely motion from the water. But, from what I can gather, the voters would not have liked this for the following reasons: > gloomy lighting which has left colour and contrast quite flat > 'parts' too obvious and unchallenging > composition not engaging enough Improvements would be: > better, brighter lighting > less 'human' viewpoint (eye-level is always a little dull) > getting closer These are simple things to improve so I hope you don't take poor ratings to heart, as this shows promise in my view. Cheers Jon

Many thanks Jon,
I greatly appreciate your very constructive comments, all of which I agree with. This is the first critique I have received but it was well worth waiting for!. It is also made me feel better because this is the first entry that didn't even merit one comment from anybody!
Do you think I may have done better with the one I originally intended?
Hmmm! I was going to attach my original image but it asks for a URL as opposed to my disk address. For my future reference and out of interest of your opinion, could you advise how I do that?

Once Upon A Time...
by aerogurl

Comment:
Well executed - lovely range of tones and nice toning