Yeah.......Field Trip!!!
by TommyMoe21

Comment:
I feel too far removed from this photo...Had you gotten closer and on the same level, capturing the children's astonished and amused faces with the bear in the background I would have really enjoyed this photo. You have captured a great moment, but have left a lot unsaid in this photo. Next time an opportunity like this comes along, be bold and capture that photograph you really wanted...

Study language
by monzer55

Comment:
This seems too simplistic and stale to me...The focus and lighting are kind of blah and the composition seems slightly tilted.

Mr. Trooper, the substitute teacher, always freaked me out.
by thommo

Comment:
Cute, but weird...not incredibly appealing and doesn't capture my gaze for too long. Nice colours, though...

The Mind of A Child
by smoon273

Comment:
Spooky-like...but not quite enough. I can't tell if you're going for warm and comfortable or spooky and cold...One way or the other would be great, but the amibiguity makes this photo less enjoyable. I think another edit of this would make for a great photo, though!

For the Teacher
by kirtiebu

Comment:
This is okay, and I like the faded effect. It seems the red apple should have been either more or less colourful. It doesn't look quite colourful enough to be the main focus of my attention, but not quite faded enough to blend in with the rest of the photo. The same applies to the tips of the four pens/markers...my vote would be to make the colours more vibrant.

A typical day in high school...
by cwalmye

Comment:
The background is very distracting here (is that a garbage can?)...

RULES..RULES..RULES!!!
by dinotech

Comment:
What was the purpose behind the choice of depth of field here? I think a greater depth would have been nicer...or the same depth but have the focus on "The Twenty Maxims" instead. A better choice in this area would have resulted in a 6...as is, I'll have to give it a 4...

college or 50 first class international tickets?
by matfitz

Comment:
This photo just looks cluttered and it looks more documentary than anything else. Yes, those are passports and money...but why am I looking at this photograph?

If only it worked this way...
by Albireo

Comment:
This photo doesn't appeal to me a whole lot and doesn't really set any sort of a mood for me, which I think could be accomplished with better lighting and angle perhaps...

road of october
by yoman

Comment:
The photo on it's own is not too bad (though not great), but it doesn't make me think of school...

I think the photo itself could have been improved with a nicer sky (waiting for better light), offsetting the path and getting closer to the ground to take the photo...