Whispered Flight
by Dr.Confuser

Comment:
Hi Charles,
Congratulations on being selected as my first critique for the Critique Club.

A very beautiful capture. Aside from the bit of bad luck with the ray of light blowing out the colour on the butterflies back. I really like how the flower stems surround your subject. If the butterflies colour had come out clean they would have been quite complimenting with the flower stems. I personally don't see any issues with the focus for you pic...but would suggest trying the AF-C (focus Mode) for shots like these. I would. I also wonder if some fill flash would have helped. When the chance arrives I will defiantly try for myself.

If you would like any further comments on any particular aspects of this photo please feel free to PM me.
Scott.

Goldfish Smoothie
by afarland

Comment:
I love this pic except for the backdrop

Fingers and feathers
by afarland

Comment:
I love the black on white....I think painting the models nails red would have added a ton of impact to this pic...

Lo mostrerò la maniera...
by macgeek007

Comment:
I think the title translates to "I'll show you the way" and if so it̢۪s very fitting....I like the tone of this pic. If possible not cropping so close to the top of her head would have helped compose the pic a little better...still very nice.

On a cloud
by s4nd3r99

Comment:
I like the caressing motion in her hand...but he shadow behind her is a little yellowish..still a very nice pic

A touch of color
by Wgridley

Comment:
really cool macro...for me it's not a really strong feeling for the subject though...I'm rateing this high because I like this pic even though I don't think it fits the challenge 100%....

If i could only touch the moon
by marlin

Comment:
An upward direction of the finger would have made the reaching for the sky effect more effective...as the finger looks like its pointing down from above....also having the finger closer to touching the moon would have helped....nice and clean pic of the moon though

The First Touch
by dsine

Comment:
I like how thw very bright lighting makes the hands almost look like stone...The palms could have used more light to eliminate the detail and shadows...nice pic

American Chestnut Fruit
by BBBastet

Comment:
A very detailed photo nice subject...I think it would have looked much better in a more natural environment

Divide by a sense of black and white, right and wrong. In the middle of these two I often drift.
by yayne

Comment:
I think this is a good pic that you tried to make fit the chalenge with the title. I like this pic it has a ying yang feel to it that is even more enforced with the title...But I dont think fits the challenge totally....there is a fairly large blurry spot in the upper middle to left aswell.