Sky light!
by kosmikkreeper

Comment:
awesome capture....love the sky above the clouds

Parrot Portraiture
by buzzrock

Comment:
superb detail and colours...the eye looks a little flat needs more colour and lighten the shadows behind the eye and from the beak on its neck

Rhino Love
by L1

Comment:
I guess this is a good thing ...being most Rhinos are endangered...LOL

First Throw
by soccerdad

Comment:
Hi Bill,
Scott here from the Critique Club...

First congratulations on your 19th place finish and your third highest scoring pic. A great capture, perfect focus and DOF. I do see a couple of things that I would have voted this pic higher for. As is I voted a 5. For me a 5 is - meets the challenge and is technically sound.

Because this was a Members challenge with Advanced editing rules. I think the board could have been a lot cleaner. Clearing up all of the black and white flecks would have helped a lot for me.

The red shaft and red and blue flight kinda blend into the colours of the board. Something more contrasting and flashy would have added some "POP" for me.

So a good all-around pic, just needed a little more wow for me.
I had a good look through your port and really like the creativity in your work. Keep up the good work and more ribbons will defiantly come.

I hope my critique helps; I know it helped me to reinforce the details in my own work. If there are any questions/comments you would like on a particular aspect of you pic please feel free to PM me.
Scott

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Message edited by author 2004-10-03 23:52:56.

Knock Out
by labuds

Comment:


I had a good long look at this pic and the others from your port. I won̢۪t waste my time here as it seems you don't need the comments. Great pic. Just a side note even though I'm new here. If the comments made from this site are generally unhelpful to you...PLEASE don̢۪t click the Critique box so others that need the critique might have a chance for one.

Message edited by HBunch - This comment was NOT from the Crit Club.

Dreams and Memories
by nico_blue

Comment:
love this shot...very surreal...sharp as a tac...and the vein is very cool.

Autumn
by garlic

Comment:
I don't see a definitive subject....so there̢۪s no real catch for me...nice colours

Fragments of a Natural Shield
by Zap228

Comment:
lacking composition and hard to control the background lighting.....but the tree bark is definatly compex and I like the title....just wish it was setup a little different

Entangled
by arngrimur

Comment:
I'm interested to see if the cutouts are all your creation or not....nice contrast with the sky

Simply Complex
by longlivenyhc

Comment:
love the lighting....wish it had more dof