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modern day iglo
01/28/2005 12:26:11 PM
modern day iglo
by JohannesFrank

Comment:
Critique Club

You have chosen an interesting architectural object here. The repeating curved lines are visually appealing. However, the snow covered rock, the bush and the stormy clouds pull my attention away from the building. I can't tell whether this is an underexposed image or whether you have purposefully darkened it for the dramatic effect. The darkening has caused a loss of detail in the window, clouds, bushes, and rock. If it were my photo, I would lighten it up.
Contrasts
01/28/2005 12:08:19 PM
Contrasts
by Beetle

Comment:
Critique Club

Overall, this is a very pleasing image. You have chosen a building with very interesting architecture. Your photo shows a very pleasing use of line, nicely squared and leveled. I like the three dimensional effect created by the building's construction. I think you could have played that up a little more using Curves to selectively brightenthe rows of windows that are offset and darkening the others. That would also have deepened the blue hues in the windows making it seem more colorful.

Your composition is pleasing with the bell tower nicely off centered. I understand why you left that small patch of sky in order to keep the cross intact. However, it was either a cloudy day or the sky is over exposed. The white sky is a little distracting from the mood set with the blues throughout the rest of the photo.
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Aurora
11/13/2004 11:42:03 PM
Aurora
by mosesm

Comment:
You need to rotate your canvas to level your waterline.
November
11/13/2004 11:39:11 PM
November
by banmorn

Comment:
Beautiful!
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Know Your Enemy
11/12/2004 06:21:55 PM
Know Your Enemy
by alien2thisworld

Comment:
This was a great idea but too much of the photo is out of focus. Perhaps if you had made the sharper focused one a larger part - the main part and had the out of focus one to be behind and smaller. . . . .
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Up Periscope!
11/12/2004 05:30:31 PM
Up Periscope!
by BigSmiles

Comment:
This was a nice idea - but your colors are not bright enough.
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Paper Clip Pie - Six Flavours!
11/12/2004 05:26:05 PM
Paper Clip Pie - Six Flavours!
by Morgan

Comment:
Clever idea - love the natural lines and bright colors!
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The Future Is Not What It Used To Be
11/12/2004 05:22:59 PM
The Future Is Not What It Used To Be
by codauber

Comment:
I like your theme - this is a great still life. Very well composed with interesting and well related objects. However, it isn't a macro IMHO
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coloring
11/12/2004 11:11:49 AM
coloring
by cowcollect

Comment:
Nice idea - good use of color and line - but this is just not in focus.
Autumn Leaf
11/12/2004 11:07:07 AM
Autumn Leaf
by ganders

Comment:
Beautiful - nice rich colors, nice and sharp - good use of line.
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