Isosceles
by escapetooz

Comment:
Lighting is beautiful, I like the idea. As a figure study, it's fabulous. I might have increased the depth of field slightly to allow a bit more detail in the leg hair, but that's the only minor detail that I could think of. Good Luck

Back
by cloudsme

Comment:
Beautiful shot. I think the only think I can suggest for improvement is the distracting arm on the far side. That may cause some annoyance on the nitpickers. Good Luck

Blue Baby
by justinbrook

Comment:
I like subject, props, and the general idea of the shot. I think the lighting is great, but I think the background would have paid off better with black. The model is kinda pale, and the excellent lighting would have still made the hat stand out from the background. That would have also eliminated the distracting shadow of her arm and right behind the neck.

FUn shot. Goodluck.

Bashfully Devious
by Darkend_Sword

Comment:
Interesting lighting, slightly flat, but works with the title. The pose is a bit boring, and works a bit against the title... unless the devious is you taking the picture without her knowing, but it's not quite right for that either. I think the shadows on the right side is a bit odd, but the falloff on the left side actually adds a bit of interest. I like the idea of the hair, but it just doesn't quite work right, cause it almost blends into the background.

"Bear" Naked
by roba

Comment:
Great lighting. A very interesting pose. I think the banister rail is a bit distracting. I also think her feet appear a bit too uncomfortable, however the shape the pointed feet add to the legs does add to some great definition, so I wouldn't worry too much about that. I think that if the model was looking at the camera, it might have added to your score as well.

Male Definition
by Sunshine86

Comment:
Very flat lighting, I would have wanted to see more definition in the skin. I like the detail of the necklace however, and the actual shape of the light. I think a bit more light, and some editing to add some contrast and you would have increased your score quite a bit. GOod Luck

The Flaming Snowball
by Rebecca

Comment:
Yep, your thread threw me here...

I feel bad, first because I didn't actually vote on your image, it was on my screen, and I got pulled from my desk until just after voting closed. But here's my written thought process on it.

The subject itself, of the girl holding fire on snow, is awesome, I think there were some distractions however. Namely the girls behind are just not seperated out enough, a slightly smaller DOF may have helped that. I don't know the DOF from it, so can't help you there, but it would have helped the seperation.

I didn't like the desat, I don't think it gained enough from it to really make it pop. I think that if the desat had been everything but the fire, that might have helped. I'm admittedly not in the desat friendly club. It was a very good job of desat, but didn't really like it.

The fire crowd was very good, so I wouldn't feel bad about the score itself, there's just alot of stuff higher in the smaller crowd.

My final score, would have been about a 7.

7 Step Solution...HA!...I have a one step solution
by sabphoto

Comment:
Tossing this a 6. I think your focus point should have been the cubes in his hand. This would have given a clear focus on the reason he used the obvious hammer creating the other pieces. If the guide was then out of focus, I would have relocated it to make it readable.

Post It Notes -- Revolutionizing Offices Everywhere
by karmat

Comment:
I'm giving this a 7, rotated about 90 degrees clockwise, I might have given it a higher score. Great idea, and good luck.

Candy Surprise
by annah

Comment:
I love the idea. I might have scored it higher if the edge of the tag hadn't dissappeared into the background. Maybe a pink tag?