Stationery
by gwsallen

Comment:
A little more depth of field would have made this better. As it is, neither clip is completely in focus. This image also seems to be more about scale than proportion. (clipping a big clip on a little letter would be proportion)

Small light
by Polar7

Comment:
Good idea, but weak presentation. The composition is staic. That chair rail in the background doesn't help. Even without finding another setting, this composition could have been improved by placing the two objects closer together, and cropping in close, to make a vertical image. This would make the verticals stronger than the horizontals. Right now, they are even. As this image is, you can improve it by cropping all the dark off the bottom, and coming in as close as you can on the sides.

New Age Restaurants
by dhare

Comment:
Ha! The portion is out of proportion.

Quit Kit
by MelGrahm

Comment:
What's a quit kit? All I see is a cigarette butt. Your techinique is good, but I don't see the connection to proportion.

Good Day vs. Bad Day
by tito79_98

Comment:
Turn off the flash and try again. The flash attached to the camera has burned out the label on the small bottle, and left the top of the large one dark. The bottles would be better standing together on a table, or inside an opened cabinet, rather than laying on.. whatever that is. It would look more natural.

Effective in-store security system
by caba

Comment:
The natural green-ness of flourescent lighting works well with this dragon!

Pink to Red
by Hallie1

Comment:
The lighting is too flat, your stems have disappeared. Something's too hot about the reds, as well. I think it is the effect of using the flash with the non-directional sunlight. Try disabling your flash, and taking more pictures!

Preferred pocket proportions
by dodee

Comment:
If I knew what this object was, I might have a better idea what the picture was about.

Proprtions of a Fuzzy Navel Ingredients
by woodenshoe50

Comment:
Something's fuzzy here, but it isn't the navel. I think your shutter speed was slow enough to get a twitch blur. Either that, or your resoulution is just too low. It's a good concept for the challenge, though.

Bellyflop
by GeneralE

Comment:
Making me laugh is always worth an extra point!