The Immortality Machine
by rooum

Comment:
Not quite sure whether this fits the bill here. I understand that you are trying to think out of the box, but the photo doesn't really tell me a story, it's too confusing and not quite a graveyard of sorts... The rule of thirds has not been applied and therefore the image looks boring and out of place. It also looks too fabricated, sorry

The Angel of Death Victorious
by tate

Comment:
A nice concept, just one little issue here and that is the blown-out whites. One must be very careful with that. If there were distinct beams of light coming through the trees and branches, you would get away with it, but this is purely blown-out. Professional photography doesn't allow for this. A rule of thirds could also have been better executed.

the long walk
by tanguera

Comment:
This photo has a good concept of the theme, but a technical error in photography lends to it's possible demise... The branches appearing in the top of the image is a no-no. Otherwise the composition is good.

crisscross
by bvy

Comment:
Sorry, but I don't know whether the final image works here. You had a great idea in mind, but failed to execute on the post-processing

1820
by jrphoto

Comment:
Lovely shot, just be careful of the blown out whites. It could be very distracting.

ascending
by grahamgator

Comment:
Beautiful shot. Good post-processing.

graveyard
by smudgeSMJ

Comment:
I like this shot and stands out well. The leading lines work well. I like the colours and the effect.

On the Hill Under the Tree
by davidw

Comment:
Nice picture, just always keep ion mind the rule of thirds.

Into the Light
by The3rdEye

Comment:
I like the idea very much, just be careful of the "light" being blown out in the final image. You could've processed the image slightly more to your advantage.

Widdershins - The disappearance of Burd Ellen
by zimple

Comment:
I like the idea and comes across well.