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| 05/29/2004 05:38:29 PM |
Attentionby TranquilComment: * Greetings from the Critique Club *
Technically, I think this is a very good photograph. The lighting is perfect to bring out all the detail in and around the eye while keeping the hair on the right side dark. Focus is excellent, all the details in and around the eye are very sharp. Composition is good, although it tends to look a bit unbalanced with the large light part on the left and the dark part on the right. Tighter cropping would have improved that.
On the emotional level, I don't find this a really very attractive photograph. The main reason for that is there's too much detail of the skin and freckles visible. Gives me a feeling of 'up real close and too personal'. I keep looking at this because it's technically good and all the details make it interesting, and I keep wanting to look away because I don't like to look at somebody else's skin from that close. Could be a personal thing, though.
Hope this is helpful. |
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| 05/28/2004 11:54:26 AM |
The Prey's Perspecitve by JoelHSmithComment: Ow, awesome! It's razor sharp, composition with only one eye showing (and right in the middle) creates real tension, and lighting is perfect. Makes me feel like a scared mouse :-)) Only thing I wonder is whether less black on the left and right sides would improve even more. |
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| 05/26/2004 11:38:11 AM |
"Can't Leave Well Enough Alone" or "Baby Needs a New Paint Job"by JesuispeureComment: * Greetings from the Critique Club! *
My impression is that this is a very nice image. Some detailed comments:
- the composition is good, with the glass slightly off center, and both middle fingers off center.
- the color match of the nail polish and the content of the glass create a sense of balance.
- lighting is excellent, no harsh shadows and everything properly lit.
- cropping could be better: it bothers me slightly that the top of the glass is not visible. The partly cropped index fingers creates tension, suggesting there's more outside the frame which makes it interesting to look at, but the top of the glass is not quite right for me, don't know exactly why.
Hope this helps, congrats on a nice image! |
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| 05/26/2004 10:41:28 AM |
David & Goliath (ll)by jjbeguinComment: Subtle, the two light sources! I like the colors in the sky very much. Pity it's a bit tilted to the right. |
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| 05/25/2004 09:53:24 AM |
Birds eye viewby mattrixComment: The idea is nice, but there is not enough of the bird in focus to keep my attention. I do like the negative space and the colors. |
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| 05/22/2004 08:07:45 AM |
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| 05/22/2004 08:06:33 AM |
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| 05/21/2004 07:38:57 AM |
Lady like??by tolovemoonComment: The compression artifacts are horrible! You're allowed 150k, if you use that you'll get much better quality. |
| 05/21/2004 07:32:12 AM |
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| 05/21/2004 07:31:01 AM |
My habitby neehaiComment: Would have liked to see also the very bottom of the glass, to give it more support. |
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