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"ROCKIN' AROUND THE CHRISTMAS TREE"by dtouch1Comment: Originally posted by TooCool:
From the Critique Club
This is a wonderfully original and seasonal take on the challenge.
Good points: See my first statement! Also the tonality here is very nice. Like the gold/train/pastel colors! Compositionally it's an interesting subject with neat framing.
Bad points: There doesn't really seem to be a focal point here. The whole shot is slightly OOF. There is also alot of noise in most of the shot probably because of the low light situation. The black portion doesn't really seem to fit with the rest of the shot. I also think that the train needs to be a more prominent part of the shot. This would help to focus the eye and give more emphasis to the wonderful perspective lines of the track!
My best suggestion is to pump up the light, play around with moving the train around a bit to find the best composition and keep shooting! If you can do a reshoot of this shot (I know the scene is kind of seasonal...) I would LOVE to see it!
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I took about 50 shots of this before i finealy got one that i liked. i'll send you some photos. dave |
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