Room Heater
by kaush

Comment:
Too dark, boring. Try to get more light, although it is dark, the lighting is even, which is good.

Bueaty Caged
by littlegett

Comment:
Too blurry, too noisy. Choose what to focus on, the bars or the animal, but not both. Don't crop it too much so that you get too blurry.

color pencils
by alysa

Comment:
I love the perspective and the panoramic feel. It would have been better without the yellow pencil and those on that side.

Amanda
by amandamiller

Comment:
I love the photo and the lighting, but I don't see any parallels.

Purple Heart
by katlyn

Comment:
A little more cropping needed on the top and right to cut off the last bit of white. Also, move the heard down to center it so that there are two stars on each side of it. I'm not sure how, but try not to have the red overpower the rest of the photo.

same ole schtick
by xburnerx

Comment:
Would have prefered the front of it to be in focus as well and not to have the shine on the front.

DP CHALLEnGE
by thumper

Comment:
Well, interesting idea, but no go for me. To make it better: use a non-reflective/shiny/velvety background- a solid black is best, make the lines straight- use a ruler or something to straighten them, do not over expose the match sticks- they are waaay too bright (the wood part) and overpower the image.

BOARDWALK
by TLL061

Comment:
Nice parallels, but the way he is standing and where he is standing make it look like a candid shot for the family photo album. Try having him closer to the camera or farther away from the camera, use the rule of thirds. Try using a larger size as well, use the 640 limit to your advantage. I don't know how or why, but it looks fuzzy, maybe you cropped it too close or something, but try to avoid this. Having the title in all capitals makes it seem like you are yelling, at least to me, and I don't like to be yelled at. ^_^

natural order
by lakritstroll

Comment:
Great color, lighting, and DOF. I don't see parallels. This would be great for a repetition challenge.

casual void
by la maga

Comment:
Hm, I see more angles than parallels, and the parallels are only if I try and find them. A tighter crop to the door and frame would help, as would a boost of contrast to make the white walls white. To prevent the yellowish coloring try and use the white balance controls on your camera, the indoor setting should overcome the yellowing effect.