Images of broken light which dance before me like a million eyes
by KristinaG

Comment:
nice idea...nice bokeh...i am sort of curious how close those lights in the background were. i wish it didn't have such a yellow cast and the background wasn't so grainy. the top of the candle feels uncomfortably high in the frame. -6

Woman
by Lad

Comment:
i wish the woman was more vibrant like that yellow splash in the background...i know sort of hard to do under the shadow of a tree. I wish she was looking at us. Your focus is a bit soft. -6

"He's a real nowhere man, sitting in his Nowhere land..."
by Bear_Music

Comment:
i really like the moths. This is a terrific concept that I'm thinking you didn't have the time or inclination to completely develop into pure poetry. As is, it's just interesting for me. - 8

Here it Comes!!
by robinssong

Comment:
Hey... your title reminded me of a Letters to Cleo song I hadn't heard in 10 years...Big Star...though it starts 'There it goes again...' ...so I'm not sure why. Anyway, the sky is very ominous. The lighting on the people on the deck is interesting. I wish I could see the people better (i know they probably wouldn't be bystanders anymore) and could better associate the storm to a metaphor of life. -8

Removed
by tanguera

Comment:
I hope to get a telegram from an agent in Hollywood someday too ;) I'm not sure of your intent, which i suppose is intriguing in and of itself as i like to try to understand what people are thinking. So I'll pretend I'm the innocent bystander watching you drive your hyundai into a pack of unexpectant DPC GTG'ers - 9

The incident
by the99

Comment:
nice find. I wish you got around the tree and focused on the poodle behind the victim. -8

Can't Wait
by dtremain

Comment:
very innocent bystander like...though I'm not understanding who can't wait and for what...but that's ok I'm kinda slow and wasn't super popular in high school :( - 8

Red
by love

Comment:
nice find. I really like how her eyes are covered by her hair and her nose is just peeking out to mimic the photo. I like the red matching and her contemplative stance. But based on your frame, the feeling of the photo is extremely claustrophobic for me...so I actually don't enjoy looking at it...perhaps it was your intent to make the viewer uncomfortable. But I obviously find it intriguing to some degree, so nice work. I'm curious how other people receive this, as for me it is probably one of the more interesting examples of innocent bystander in the collection (not that i haven't seen my fill of odd juxtapositions at museums...don't feel bad...i'm guilty too ;) ), yet the cropping off of the photo and the odd angle is very un-dpc. best of luck in all your photo endeavors. -9

The Sequel
by MeMex2

Comment:
yes i agree...odder than the original

No Post Bills
by muur88

Comment:
Thanks all. The world is a strange place, though not perfect. If it was a perfect place, the guys would have been closer together and the street wouldn't have suddenly gotten busy as they walked through the scene. ...Oh and more people like yourselves would get my sense of humor ;)...Oh and they would have been buffalo bills supporters...but it's too far away to tell anyway...so let's just pretend they are ;)

Message edited by author 2010-12-18 14:04:18.