Boardwalk
by sbeaumont

Comment:
wow...killer composition. looks like you might have overprocessed it a bit. i wish the sky had a more uniform brightness

Leading To Big Business
by Strikeslip

Comment:
very crisp shot. too bad the escalator was an up and wasn't able to strengthen the movement into the pic/

The Toy Store
by shutterphunk

Comment:
excellent lines...especially working them from right to left, which is the first shot i've seen in this challenge where it doesn't feel awkward to me.

Proud as a.....
by inspir8tion

Comment:
very nice pic...almost painterly. the trouble i have is your spine lines have all sorts of thin feather lines crossing over then, effectively lessening their impact. i'm naturally drawn to the subject but i don't feel it's due to the lines

Spanning the Bay
by rayg544

Comment:
nice composition. i think your border hi-lites your most unfortunate area...that blow out in the upper right. i think a darker border would have strengthened the pic. I also think a horizontal flip would have also strengthened the leading line...but that's just a Western thing.

Line of the ring
by Fyzarl

Comment:
excellent old time feel. technique and tone is perfect in my mind. almost too good as the exceptional focus seems to highlight a bit of fuzz at the end of the third ring.

Convergence
by conglett

Comment:
great lines, good focus, great exposure. though, other than the sky the subject is just too plain

Over The River & Through The Woods
by Travis99

Comment:
i like the way the trees turned out from your processing. your line is good, bit i wish you had allowed the other side of the bridge opening to be in view. the way you have set it up the bridge is the end and my eye isn't able to fully wander up the road.

Starting Line
by SeaSail

Comment:
crisp shot. your lines seem to be in a bit of a competition with each other, and don't end up drawing me at your subject, as my mind wants to follow the lanes off of the page. setting him up at the starting line and taking the shot straight down the race lanes would have been a bit more cliche, but i think it would have reinforced the challenge better.

Take Off
by karmat

Comment:
good lines. a bit grainy though. would have liked to see a bunch more contrast and blacker blacks. i would have cropped down to the top of the tree line.