over hill, over dale
by tvsometime

Comment:
Interesting. It does have a landscape feel with the patterns of the clothing. Good choice to use B&W, and good focus and tones.

Re-Engineered for Perfection
by Damon

Comment:
Good concept and mostly well executed. I see a blob in the backdrop on the top left, and leaving off the top of the banana may or may not have been a good choice, if it was misshapen or ugly I probably would have recommended shearing it off and at least composing to include what's left.

Shhh
by giantmike

Comment:
Very nice concept and well executed. Simple, and the in-focus areas are well placed. Tilt-shift lens?

Mums The Word
by HornOUBet

Comment:
Nice simple concept, could have been improved by some technical improvements though. There is some ghosting on the fingers, usually caused by using the flash combined with a slow enough shutter speed to take in ambient light while the subject moves.
It would look better if you used off-camera lighting - doesn't have to be a flash, just get close to whatever light source it is. That would allow you to use a smaller aperture for more DOF - there's no reason not to have the entire face in focus for a close-up concept shot like this.
I would also recommend touching up the zipper pull's chipped paint - easy enough with either a paint brush tool, a mask or selection to do localized brightness/contrast, or even clone stamp.

... hmm
by Tiberius

Comment:
Visually this is very good, and I think it would make a good print in a sort of abstract way as a study of shapes and textures and colors. I don't get the concept if there was meant to be one, though.

Is That A Ball In Your Pocket...?
by JakeKurdsjuk

Comment:
Good lighting and composition, and I like the layered textures and patterns. Good placement of the focus and DOF as well.

Parting Ways
by dtremain

Comment:
Good composition, but it could benefit from more sharpness and depth of field to include the YKK letters, and also more contrast.

oh sew trendy
by PennyStreet

Comment:
This has the makings of a good photo, but it's lacking in sharpness and the black hair would stand out better with a lot more light.

Z is for ....
by adriano74

Comment:
This is very cool. I like the neon colors and the striking contrast, and the composition is great. Maybe it's a calibration issue but all I see of the fourth row is the bright part of the zipper pull. If it was meant to be that dark, I would have left that out to keep it simple.

Helping hand
by lei_73

Comment:
Nice composition, lighting and tones and you've done a pretty good job making the black dress stand out from a black background, but I think another color dress would have worked better.