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| 02/28/2003 03:42:59 PM |
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| 02/28/2003 09:21:04 AM |
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| 02/27/2003 11:19:07 AM |
Used To Beby goodtempoComment: Critique Club COmments
This is an interesting image with a story to tell. The yellow meets the challenge, with some character to boot!
I'd prefer to see the subject and building not so lined up and centered. Maybe positioned so the eyes follow a diagonal line. Of course there are many different angles to pursue.
Someone mentioned the colors not being saturated enough. I disagree. Actually the overcast day helps the saturation.
DOF is good, although, another possibility would be to have the building out of focus...oof.
Overall I think you did a fine job.
Best of luck!
Regards,
Grayce |
| 02/26/2003 11:02:08 PM |
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| 02/26/2003 11:05:48 AM |
Today's Highliteby jimmspComment: Critique CLub Comments
Very effective image, that also meets the challenge right one! I love the simpicitiy of this composition. The diagonal line works beautifully and the use of negative space works well.
I like the yellow border, but I definetly agree that the yellow line from the marker should touch the border, and a little more space left at the bottom of the marker, would have made the image better.
As it is, it is still a wonderful picture. Good work! I like this very much.
Regards,
Grayce |
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| 02/26/2003 10:53:24 AM |
Watcha lookin' at?by zadoreComment: Critique Club Comments
Everyone would agree that the color meets the challenge without dispute. The color is rich and vibrant and is well lit, and exposed. The surface appears to be shiny, yet you've handled any glare quite well.
This is certainly abstract, and you've got 'em all guessing, with no one being able to identify your subject.
As others have said, it isn't very interesting. There are no compelling elements that make one want to explore further. It's all laid out clearly, but no identifying marks. perhaps if you'd included more of the item, it would have proved more interesting.
Regards,
Grayce
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| 02/25/2003 11:34:58 PM |
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| 02/25/2003 11:26:20 PM |
One Room Schoolhouseby TarbiniComment: Nicely composed, exposure, and focus are wonderful. I love the way the building is surrounded by the pattern of bare branches. Good image. |
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| 02/25/2003 11:23:43 PM |
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