bouncing soul
by salparadi

Comment:
There isn't enough information to know what this is. Is it a pregnant woman, a man's arm or what? It's overprocessed and there is a lot of motion blur.

Unicorn Rain
by C-Fox

Comment:
I like the idea. There is a yellow overcast that I don't like. It tends to dull the other colors. The composition is too static.
I am updating my comments. Thanks for the explanation. If you try the unicorn again, I bet it would be really beautiful in a glass of wine in candlelight.

Concrete and Iron
by grigrigirl

Comment:
Good tones and dof composition. Fits the challenge for me even if it's not a building per say. 7

restful lake
by bexforlife

Comment:
It's not so much that it doesn't fit the challenge. It's the lack of focus, the composition, and lack of details. I feel I would be insulting you if I offered any suggestions about how you could improve this. Good luck.

Federal Buildings
by GeneralE

Comment:
I know this is your interpretation of what urban means, but I must say I don't like the color treatment. Just wanted to let you know why I didn't give you a higher score. It looks like a very decent image if not for the colors. Only thing composition wise, I'd crop the sky down to just above the highest lightpost.

Montreal
by bormic

Comment:
I somewhat like the foreground. And I know that all the books say you have to have a foreground, but what the books don't say is the foreground should compliment the picture either by framing in a pleasing way or thru repetition of the shape of the body of the picture. The foreground should not be more overpowering than the body of the picture. So using this, the red in the leaves compliment the red in the one building. That is good. The limbs on the side just get in the way and distract from the view.

Intimacy of a town
by fanfuine

Comment:
I like this. Every city needs it's intimate spaces. A little over exposed but I guess your camera was fooled by the dark door in the center. It looks like you were using spot metering and picked the darkest part to calculate with. Oops, I do that all the time.

Morning In Mosul
by genmp

Comment:
Amazing that no matter where in the world, buildings have a generic look. A little too hazy in my opinion, but still clear enough to see. I would have pumped up the saturation and contrast. But your treatment gives a peaceful feeling. Ironic isn't it?

For Rent , 2 Bedroom Flat.....
by medic391

Comment:
The color seems to be off, too blue. I think the composition does a good job at accenting the narrowness of the building even though ideally I would perfer it being a little futher over to the left touching just above the lower corner and maybe taking up a little more of the frame. The perspective works well also. 7

I Love New York...
by tolyanchik

Comment:
I think I would have liked it more if you had stood back futher. All the lines and angles become confusing and you cut off the people walking around which could have given the picture a little extra something.