driving in your car, I never never want to go home
by pricklypete

Comment:
Too much post processing has made this loose it's photographic integrity. It is now a graphic.

postal scale
by sns

Comment:
Fingers should be out of the frame. Focus appears to be on the finger area, when it should be on the scale meter.

Solitude
by van9338

Comment:
This looks over sharp and over saturated.

Simple Diet
by TimPro

Comment:
I thought I had self-control issues... Oi Vay!
This one's rather dark. Shine some light on the lock.
It's interesting, but the clutter on the front of the fridge needs to be removed.
Straighten up that edge on the fridge to be vertical in the frame, or else make it much more abstract by greatly increasing the angle.
A portrait style crop would have been interesting too. More height, less width.
I can't think of any more comments! Hope those help!

Vase
by JC_Homola

Comment:
Just my personal opinion, I don't like the crop on this one.

colours
by imagesloyola

Comment:
Good lighting. I'm not sure if I like the square, close cropping on this.

The Last Marigold
by Zollarstem

Comment:
This is out of focus and the background needs to be simpler, more DOF is needed.
On a positive note, it fills the frame nicely and the colors are vibrant.

total chaos
by darklord13

Comment:
Here's my comments:

- get in closer to the subject
- eliminate the background, make it simpler. A brick wall would have been better.
- find a shady spot outside for more even lighting.

Tennis anyone?
by ladpupmoe

Comment:
I just don't think the focus is sharp enough on the ball. I wonder how this would be in color? I hope you will show us later.

Square Snowball?
by fdpiech

Comment:
Good depth of field here. Somehow this looks like a captured scene from some commercial footage, and not a photo. I am not making an accusation though, just commenting on the look of the photo.