Off Roading
by BAMartin

Comment:
A good picture for a classified ad selling a used car-- if that's your goal, then well done -- if your goal is to sell the Jeep, though, I think an action shot would be better -- even just putting the jeep on some kind of incline -- the colors seem a little bit blown out -- maybe that's due to a lower end camera, so i don't factor that into my score

Xbox - Play More !
by insipidangel

Comment:
K, I just don't get it -- but apart from that, it seems a little too dark. My eye is drawn to the bar of soap as a focal point, but the hair there isn't as focused as it is in the upper right corner

salt that stings
by ritaard

Comment:
I have to say I don't know what you're selling, but the shot is very good nevertheless

What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment:
For a product ad, like this, I think you might want to try to make sure that all the product's name is in the shot. Also, the bottle of Pepsi is really small in the shot -- a tighter crop on the girl could help that some. While the lighting is great for the rocks behind her, it really shadows the right side of her face. It's kind of typical, but I think I would have had her drinking from the bottle, faced a little more toward the sun, and zoomed in a bit. That way you could still have the nice background, but with a little more on the proudct placement.

Got Catnip?
by Swashbuckler

Comment:
A clever play on the got milk ads, but the focus really harms this one I think. Instead of a cat trying to get at the catnip, as gross as it sounds, to me it looks like a cat projectile vomiting. I think a sharper focus would have prevented this.

We do have more than just wings
by d95vette

Comment:
I think I would have gone for a vertical to crop out the guys at the bar on the left and the cook on the right. As I look at the products on the table, I can only tell that three of them are Hooters gear -- maybe a little more arrangement of the products to show them off a bit more

Need We Say More!
by sulamk

Comment:
I hope this won't come across too harsh -- cause I like the idea in the pic -- but it looks kind of like the cat is gagging, not licking it's lips. It looks like you were shooting in low light and had to use a relatively slow shutter speed and so couldn't freeze the tongue too well, which is a shame

What?...she was BEGGING for it!
by Digiteyes

Comment:
OK, I think it's funny, but I don't think it makes me want to buy M&Ms anytime soon. :-) the colors seem a touch to blue. Either try using the color balance in the camera, or tweaking the levels in your image editing program.

Priceless...
by GeneralE

Comment:
Because of the title, I'm trying to make this into a Mastercard commerical, but I'm not able to make the leap. Other than that, I don't know what else you might be trying to advertise. Cute children, I like the slide, but I find the other background elements detract from the kids.

Mutt for Sale
by tjpierre

Comment:
It seems a tad unfocused -- I think maybe a vertical shot, taken at more of a top down angle would have helped you lose all that "empty space" on the sides of the image and removed the roofs of the houses in the background