Fakir
by bnilesh

Comment:
lovely shot. Looking at it with a critical eye it would have looked better if he had a black jumper on instead of that one, but that is beyond your control.

Jac-2.jpg
by Ivory

Comment:
I really like 2/3s of your shot here. Great angle and pose and love the freckles and wide open eyes. You have not done your model any favours with your post production of the hair as right now it looks very flat and lifeless. I think it just needs an over all boost.

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by Paul

Comment:
really great shot this. I love how you popped the lips and the lighting that you have used. NOt being able to see the models eyes really give a sense of mystery here. Big kudos shoud go to the model as well for all the work she has gone into eps those eye lashes. Did you get a shot with her eyes open and looking at the camera in that pose as well?

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by kingskingdom

Comment:
good implied nude with a beautiful model. I would remove the love heart tattoo. Also perhaps you should have got her to bring a skin coloured bra as the peach colour is coming though the hair

Z i e l o n e
by njsabs

Comment:
wow this shot is a really keeper. Those eyes are something special and I also like how you have a nice dark background here with a nice complementary green. You might want to thinking about dodging around her right eye a touch. The hand placement look a little bit unnatural and I am not sure what you are trying to say with them. Might also want to remove the hair tie around her wrist.

a certain charm
by photokariangel

Comment:
really nice self portrait with a nice pose and good camera angle. Love the way the depth of field works here. I would have liked it if the hyper focal plain also included your lips as right now its going from the hair line to your eyes. maybe f3 so that your hair is still in focus. Well something to think about anyway.

If you want to shot other people just go out and make some attractive friends, or you can bribe younger brothers and sisters with chocolate.

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by bobonacus

Comment:
I like the fact that you have taken an unusual crop for a hi-key shot. Personally I don't think this shot really works but I cannot really put my finger on why.

blush
by Lutchenko

Comment:
nice pose with an interesting angle. You model does appear to be a little bit uncomfortable stretching so far back judging by her brow lines. Maybe raising her shoulders up with a small pillow underneath would have helped her out for this pose. I am sorry to say that I am not a fan of the checks the colour just looks out of place here. Leave it as a nice bw shot or hand colour the whole image if you want that look.

by yanko

Comment:
nice portrait with a good pose. Did you try adding some more contrast as the image appears a touch flat. I would have also tried to get the model to spread (is possible) her hair over the right shoulder so it block the shoulder.

Day Five
by LMA128

Comment:
nice self portrait. I would be happy with a shot like that. The high key touch here works well as does hiding you of your eyes to add a little bit more mystery. I would remove those few loose hairs in post production or be extra careful when taking the shot. To see a little bit more of your lovely eyes try moving the soft box (it looks like one anyway) around (closer) a little bit further so that it reflects off the white of your eye. Or you could tile you head around to the camera a bit more.