"Mixing" Cooking Oil and Dark Soya Sauce
by Cheerz

Comment:
Its a little dark. I think it would have been a more effective shot if the focus was darker. Also, I might have tried putting the large blobs of soy sauce in a corner of the frame instead of right in the middle.

Crime Scene: The Beginning of the Afterlife
by cup4tml

Comment:
This is a really interesting idea.

I think what might have made this a better shot for me would be less distractions in the background. If the dead woman was laying on a dark coloured floor, then when she stood up (for the ghost effect), you wouldn't see as much of a transparency in the body. As it is now, you can tell that the dead body is a bit see-through.

I also would have like the ghost to be closer to the body... like leaning up really close to the face, or perhaps even half-way in the body and half-way out. I don't know if that was possible.

Interesting idea!

Smoking is bad for you, look what it did to my nose
by Art

Comment:
This is the first of the photos that I've looked at so far in this challenge that I actually like. I love the lighting and the angle of the shot. My only criticism would be the blue blob in the top left corner -- I don't think it adds anything to the effect of this photo and it is a bit distracting.

The Good Wife
by RKT

Comment:
Okay, first, it's not a flower (yes, yes, I see the apron. What's your point?). Second, it's boring. Third, the framing is static. And fourth... hmm, well there isn't a fourth. But I just don't like it.

She Loves Me Not
by Blackbox

Comment:
Good for her! lol...

When you take a flower in your hand and really look at it, it's your world for the moment.
by toddhead

Comment:
Title is too long. And the flower doesn't have enough details in it.

Daringly Black and White (Not Artwork)
by JulietNN

Comment:
You're right... it's not artwork. It's not my taste at all.

Symphony of colors
by pall

Comment:
The colours don't look natural to me... I also don't like those two sharp lines of the petals that are in focus. It seems out of place.

Une touche de jaune
by Kathe

Comment:
strange colours on the stem... it doesn't look natural.

The Visitor
by haze

Comment:
I see the visitor -- very cool! This photo gets a high mark from me. My only criticism would be the tie on the stem. Could you have moved it up higher so that it was out of the shot and tucked behind the white petal? I found it distracting.