Light as The Breeze
by DCrest01

Comment by jgirl57:
Not voting- commenting only

Different image and it is nice to be seen

Ribbon
by DCrest01

Comment by Zita:
Good concept nicely presented with well executed composition. This appears as though it may have been buzzed or simplified, processes which I greatly enjoy - normally. The degree to which this as been simplified leaves the image, for me, feeling pixelated. And, I think, it is due to the inherent coarseness of the ribbon's threads. I wonder if MORE simplification would smooth out those hard squares and lend to a more flowing impression? Nonetheless, the form and lines are topnotch, it is the "texture" that just didn't work for me.

Please do not be offended by reaction; remember, abstract photography is an art form, subject to the viewer's emotions. Regardless of my experience with the overall texture, I think your eye is very good for this type of work. So, quite sincerely, I wish you good luck with the image.

Light as The Breeze
by DCrest01

Comment by nam:
As far as I'm concerned, this is beyond cool. Looks like it might be an art piece or do you just cart around a window with a curtain so you can set it up interesting places?

Light as The Breeze
by DCrest01

Comment by jomari:
I love the window and curtain. I sort of wish that it lined up with the end of the boardwalk rather than the fence and vegetation. 8

Sue's Dock
by DCrest01

Comment by Melethia:
The overlay doesn't seem to be as well integrated here as in shoom. More like the picture got wet somewhere along the line - made it through a flood perhaps.

Light as The Breeze
by DCrest01

Comment by smardaz:
i want to like this more than i do, i feel like a different crop may have pushed it up farther

Light as The Breeze
by DCrest01

Comment by JakeKurdsjuk:
Love the image. Would like a little more space under the window frame (or less at the top), and the frame squared to the horizon would be nice too.

Lost
by DCrest01

Comment by BrennanOB:
Glorious light with interesting asymmetry. I like the blues and the yellows with that hint of pink at the ceiling. It reminds me of the work of Robert Irwin.
My one quibble is the skewed roof beam. It would have made a more pleasing image (for me alone perhaps) had you skewed the image to justify that beam and the side walls from keystoned,into perfect symmetry to allow the walls and the decayed roof to be the only things out of balance. It is pretty easy to do and legal in this rule set, and the sort of edit that would have stilled the image into a pure exploration of light

Lost
by DCrest01

Comment by streetpigeon:
There's a clinical feel to this brought on by the sharp angles and edges, despite the evidence of dirt on the floor and a tattered ceiling. What makes this image for me is the overall iridescence. There's a sense of expectation here, as if the building itself is going to pull off some transformative miracle. Fine capture of this elusive atmosphere.

Light as The Breeze
by DCrest01

Comment by Ivory:
What a lovely image, it is so peaceful.