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| 12/22/2008 09:03:14 PM |
Smiles: Vintage & Virginby WeJayComment by jeger: Greetings from the critique club...
I want to start by saying that this is an excellent photograph. The crop is great, the focus is excellent, and the contrast in colour of clothing between the man and the boy work very well. Creating this image as a black & white photograph was a good choice as it lets the viewer focus on their teeth, which you have chosen as your main subject.
Your photograph fits the theme very well. Although you are comparing their teeth, there are many other comparisons to be made regarding their age and wisdom. The only constructive comment I can make would be regarding your title. In the western world, we read from left to right, and therefore "Smiles: Virgin & Vintage" would make more sense, as the title would match up with the photograph. If you do not come from a western background, then I stand corrected.
If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you. |
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| 12/21/2008 05:41:44 PM |
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| 12/21/2008 04:02:48 PM |
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| 12/20/2008 06:56:54 PM |
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| 12/19/2008 09:05:58 PM |
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| 12/18/2008 07:08:25 PM |
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| 12/17/2008 07:59:28 PM |
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| 12/17/2008 01:51:00 PM |
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| 12/17/2008 01:06:12 PM |
Rejected, Dejectedby WeJayComment by tanguera: Funny and sad. Great topic, but I think a tiny bit of back lighting would have added dimension, especially to the dejected nut. |
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| 12/17/2008 09:00:40 AM |
Rejected, Dejectedby WeJayComment by HeiSch: lovely detailed textures, lighting a little harsh on the left side, but I guess this was intended to highlight the out-casted? |
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