#3
by WeJay

Comment by raish:
Magnificent. It's all grey on the streets around here. This is warming to watch.

#3
by WeJay

Comment by odriew:
The yellows really stand out even in the thumbnails! Is that your shadow in the LL?

#1
by WeJay

Comment by tamatama:
This makes one's eyes wander around in the picture to see what is going on in the different corners. What is the pink stuff? Some kind of sweets maybe?

#2
by WeJay

Comment by tamatama:
Wonder what they were thinking or talking about...
The boy running into the scene makes this really interesting!

#3
by WeJay

Comment by tamatama:
I love your colorful street shots!

Probably I'd also crop just that bit on the left - but that's just a minor detail...

#4
by WeJay

Comment by tamatama:
My, that's some colorful laundry! I like the woman who seems to be watching your activity suspiciously.

Bubble Dreams
by WeJay

Comment by Senay:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

This is my first critique, hopefully you find it helpful!

First Impression: Very interesting image with many things happening. I didn't notice the balloons on the box and was left wondering what exactly the bubbles were.

Composition: I like the way the pole seems to split the image into two separate yet joined scenes.

Subject: Good street photo with different things happening everywhere you look.

Technical: As another commenter said there are not enough bubbles in this picture. If the bubbles at the top had not been cut off you would have received a higher score.

Final thoughts: I was surprised to see you only scored a 5.02. I personally gave this shot a 7. I think this is due to the bubbles not being as much the main subject as other entries in this challenge.

If you have any questions click here to message me!

Senay

Message edited by author 2010-01-29 21:14:17.

#4
by WeJay

Comment by Ter:
to be honest i didnt even notice the woman on the stairs untill i read your other comments
the mass of vibrant colors really drew my attention at first
with the lens you used you would have had the option of drawing back a bit and capturing a wider scene if the surroundings were not as vibrant as this scene it would have really shone out in the middle of the shot {i hope i havent confused you} pm me if i have

a wonderful portrail of life on the streets

Message edited by author 2010-01-29 20:55:40.

#4
by WeJay

Comment by EL-ROI:
You are doing such a great job showing off the vibrant colors of India on the street! The woman in the staircase seems to be hiding from you. There is a statement here as well with the satelite dish shown among the run down looking buildings... Nice job.

#4
by WeJay

Comment by sulamk:
Beautiful colour and an insight into the lives of the people on the street