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01/29/2010 09:12:30 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is my first critique, hopefully you find it helpful!
First Impression: Very interesting image with many things happening. I didn't notice the balloons on the box and was left wondering what exactly the bubbles were.
Composition: I like the way the pole seems to split the image into two separate yet joined scenes.
Subject: Good street photo with different things happening everywhere you look.
Technical: As another commenter said there are not enough bubbles in this picture. If the bubbles at the top had not been cut off you would have received a higher score.
Final thoughts: I was surprised to see you only scored a 5.02. I personally gave this shot a 7. I think this is due to the bubbles not being as much the main subject as other entries in this challenge.
If you have any questions click here to message me!
Senay
Message edited by author 2010-01-29 21:14:17. |
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01/24/2010 11:54:45 PM |
Interesting street scene; not enough "bubbles" to make them the subject. |
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01/20/2010 10:03:53 PM |
What a poignant look on the face of the observing child. Is she entranced by the spectacle of the bubbles? Does she feel outside and wanting to participate? Does the older woman see within as the vendor is clearly pointing her to? The face of the man on the far right is watching too while the woman in the spotted blouse has turned her back to chat with him and the other vendor is self absorbed. I suspect there are as many tales in this photograph as there are balloons and bubbles, each waiting to be told. |
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01/20/2010 08:02:32 PM |
I used to love that stuff. |
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